Chapter 2: i couldn't see the "Suho's cottage (in 1912)".anyway...this is beautiful

Chapter 2: This is sooooo good....u did a good job ^^

Oh my god... This is just beautiful, I have no other word for this. Your descriptions are outstanding and detailed and this whole story is just amazing! Definitely my favorite of all!

Oh my goodness~ all my feels...

I never shipped SuLay but you've got me falling so hard for them.

I loved your descriptions, they were so beautifully crafted and thought out. Something I that I feel like is lacking in most of the stories here. Also, I love how you make their feelings so real and they are so easy to connect to. The storyline is very original, beautifully simple and simply beautiful. Wonderful job.

Just a few suggestions. I think you should be careful of your tenses. Sometimes you changed and it was a little confusing. Also, just a little aesthetic thing, maybe you should play around with the formatting. The way you have it, it's kind of difficult to see where something starts and another ends.

Apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes, wonderful work. Had me speechless. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading your other works~

P.S I'm planning on entering the same contest as you. Best of luck to both of us, haha xD

Love the way you wrote this story! Fabulous job~

Holy crap. Omg. I just love this so much. Just, the use of the dates and everything is...<3

aaaaaa~!
I don't know what to say! except that it was so beautiful! the way Suho had written it down, the way you wrote the whole story :o so beautiful!
And Lay blaming himself, ah.
You made them feel so humane, so realistic so... authentic :D Like ... I can't even describe it XD
Ah. loved it.
I wish you luck to the competition! :)
Keep up the good work, this was beautiful even if i can't really get a proper word out of my mouth :D
thank you for writing this! :)