Broken Heartbeats

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Meeting him was like drowning in the raging ocean. The waves of the twinkle in his eyes, his smile and his touch crashed into him, unforgiving, making his heart beat rapidly in his chest, skipping beats. It made him wonder if he would ever get out alive.

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lalicesarang #1
Chapter 1: Kai is an angel here really sehun must sace a nation in his previous life to be able to have kai as his bff.
Generalchan #2
Chapter 1: Loved this. Your endings are always so give and take, everyone can precieve the story' ending in different ways! Although it confuses me more of the time thats what makes your writing so wonderfully different!
cnbluefan #3
Chapter 1: Ahh. Kai's in love with Sehun ?
eudaimonia #4
Chapter 1: klsdjasdakl luhan is such a jerk ;A;
I don't understand the ending part orz /toodumbtounderstand
JEONJUNGK00K #5
Chapter 1: this is so beautifully written T_T it's just so so beautiful i dont have any more words to say. its quite sad that luhan is the bad one in this story though but all the other things are amazingly written :) xx
TheMoron #6
Chapter 1: T_T.... So beautiful...
biigbanng #7
Chapter 1: This was beautiful!
I imagine that Sehun realized that all he needs is Kai and they live happily ever after.
I need to make a happy ending or I'll be sad for hours lol

But Was the ending quote a metaphor or did Sehun commit suicide? :S
Minspro #8
This was beautifully written <3
It was quite sad though, I hope that Jongin can console Sehun and then they'll end up together ^^
Are you thinking of writing a sequel? I hope so ^^
shixunist #9
This is really good. But about the ending... don't tell me Sehun committed suicide or something? :( Or is that just a metaphorical term? I loved this story. :)
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