Love Me Like A Stranger.

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Love Me like A Stranger.

Excerpt:

"A large sigh fell from my mouth. I pursed my lips in annoyance. Now even my boyfriend was tailing my

. I had responsibilities, why doesn't he understand that? I couldn't be the silent supportive girlfriend

who stood on the side lines like he wanted me to be. Sometimes dating another celebrity was

burdensome. Jiyong needed me to be home when he had a long day at work and comfort him with all

his problems. To be at his beck and call 24/7…when will he realize he can't control me? I wasn't one of

his es he could order around, and he'd have to learn the hard way."

Foreword

Hello, hello to all my darling readers! I know I have been away for...quite some time now lol. But i'm not

focusing on that. It's clearly not the point to this forward. This is a very long one shot that I've been

writing on for a couple of days on a spur of the moment 3am plot bunny. It's full of Skydragon, which you

all love, and , which you all ing love more lol. Well most of you ;) This is one of my fantasies on

paper, so I hope you all take a little something out of it. Drop a comment, some critisim, or anything

really. Feedback makes me HAPPPYYYYY. So take a peek at my baby. It's 50 pages long, and ENJOY!

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chocolatefrosty #1 Mar 5, 2013 17:54:10

Chapter 2: This is hot! Love this!

xtlover15 #2 Jul 11, 2012 08:03:13

yes yes this was so god. i love it, perfect xD.

ninasunrise #3 Jul 10, 2012 21:30:50

nicely done! jealous chaerin and jiyong are always fun to read about. i would've liked a bit more context of where they are each at individually and within their relationship, but that's just me being greedy.

lraihana11 #4 Jul 10, 2012 10:57:32

Thanks for the constructive criticism! I guess I should've invested in a final look over lol. I was just so tired last night. I'll go back and fix it up later.

As for the "burly arms" I definitely see where you guys are coming from, but when I was writing I guess I was thinking more along the lines of....in Chae's mind because Ji had become so imposing in the moment that's how they appeared to her. Because let's be honest, Ji isn't really built or toned at all. Since it's from Chae's POV I felt that this was the illusion painted of Jiyong in her drunk mind at least lol. But if this still doesn't make sense I'll go ahead and change it later ;)

skytothedragon04 #5 Jul 10, 2012 10:55:55

Best make-up ever XD

blooddragon #6 Jul 10, 2012 06:52:12

That was hot.

springtempo #7 Jul 10, 2012 06:19:12

again like i commented on another ff...what angie just said....the typos are overlooked because it's one hell of a long chapter....i loved it...the jealousy the rage the angst the ..everything.../claps/ loved it

ann_the_insomniac #8 Jul 10, 2012 04:00:17

And it's done! All I have to say is that there were typos, but given the fact that this is 50 pages long I'm pretty sure that editing this was a lol. In the case of classifying Ji's arms as 'burly', I would've used the word toned to describe them. This was a nice read and I always enjoy a jealous Chaerin and Jiyong. Will wait for your update on The Story of Us!

Jwcr0311 #9 Jul 10, 2012 02:05:07

THanks for sharing! I loved CL's independence and fierceness, and the sweetness at the end. My only nitpick would be Jiyong's "burly arms"? GD's not really what I'd call burly in any way, shape or form. The guy wears the same clothes as Dara!

ann_the_insomniac #10 Jul 8, 2012 20:58:59

(Im)patiently waiting.........