Jung Francis Jr.?

The Mansion of Love and Murder

Min shot herself and died

"Oh no!" Gyuri said

"Gyuri, open the door!" Minho said

"Okay." Gyuri said

Gyuri opened the door and Minho saw Min's corpse.

"She comitted suicide." Gyuri said

"Oh no!" Minho said

Everyone who heard the gun shot came to the location of the sound and they screamed when they saw Min's corpse.

"Min, why do you have to die? Now, I'm alone." Suzy said

"Is... she...comitted..." Eunhyuk said, finiding the words

"Yes, she comitted suicide." Minho said

"But, why did she do that?" Hyoyeon asked

"Because, she's the one who killed Nichkhun, Fei and maybe Changsun." Minho said

"What!? No, I don't think she could do that!" Seungyeon said

"Yes, I know that she can't do that. But, if she've been hypnotized, yes." Minho said

"What do you mean?" Minhyuk asked

Minho took the crushed hairclip.

"With this hairclip, she was hypnotized." Minho said

"But, how could you know that it was the hairclip who gave the signals?" Gyuri asked

"Because, Suzy said to me something I remembered." Minho replied

"Suzy, said what?" Junsu asked

*Flashback*

"Minho, did you see Min's hairclip somewhere?" Suzy asked

"No, but I will try to find it." Minho replied

"Okay." Suzy said

*End of the Flashback*

"Yes, you're right! It's this hairclip that Min was missing!" Suzy said

"So, I think she found it. But, the owner put this hypnotizer before." Minho said

"You mean Jung Francis." Donghae said

"No, not him. He died and if he was alive, he will have more than 200 years old." Minho said

"So, who is the owner?" Siwon asked

"It might be Jung Francis' grandson." Minho said

The Owner's POV:

"Oh no! Minho is beginnig to discover my identity! I have to kill him." I thought

"Hey, are you alright?" Nicole asked me

"Yes, I'm just surprised by these informations." I replied

"Oh, okay." she said

"Pheww..." I thought

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Nobody's POV:

The next day, everyone noticed that Sunny and Kangin were missing. They were worried, especially Jonghyun (CN Blue). They saw a letter fell.

Dear Kpop Groups,

You might discovered my identity, but you will all DIE, anyway. So, I don't care. You will a have challenge today. You will have to dodge lasers at the principal corridor. All of you will play at the same time. You can push the others kekeke... The first one to touch a laser will DIE. So, bad luck!

From The Mansion's Owner

"What a weird challenge." Jessica said

"Yes, I think too." Krystal said

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Sunny and Kangin woke up in the top secret room.

"I'm so tired!" Kangin said

"Yes, me too!" Sunny said

And they saw a letter.

Dear Kangin and Sunny,

It's your turn to do a challenge in the top secret room. You will have to dodge poisoned arrows, if you get hit you will DIE. The challenge will end when someone will DIE!

From The Mansion's Owner

"What!? One of us will die!" Sunny said

"I don't want to." Kangin said

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The others began their challenge. The corridor was a little bit too small. The lasers began to shoot.

"I almost touched it!" Taemin said

"Pheww... Why the lasers are so fast?" Leeteuk said

Ten minutes passed, everyone was tired.

"It's so long! And I'm tired!" Sulli said

And Suzy got an idea.

"Bye, the world I knew." Suzy whispered

She voluntarily touch a laser. The lasers were gone.

"Umm... who touched the lasers?" Jonghyun (SHINee) asked

And a gunshot was heared.

"Okay, nobody is dead?" Tiffany asked

"Oh, I think that nobody died." Hara replied

"Okay, we should go." Onew said

So, everyone except Suzy was gone. And Suzy collapsed. Everyone heard it and went to the corridor and saw Suzy's corpse.

"Oh no! Suzy is dead!" Luna said

"Poor her! I think she did that voluntarily." Jiyoung said

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Sunny and Kangin were doing their challenge. Mor the minutes pass, more the challenge was hard. And someone touched got a poisoned arrow.

"Oh no you have an arrow!" someone said

"Yes, but I don't want to die!" the other person said

Kangin collapsed.

"Oh no! Kangin! You're dead." Sunny said

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Yoona, Taecyeon, Seohyun and Yonghwa went to the Arcade Room.

"What do you want to do?" Seohyun asked

"I don't know. Yoona, Taecyeon an idea?" Yonghwa replied

"I don't know, Yoona?" Taecyeon said

"Mmm... something that we did't play often." Yoona said

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Kyuhyun, Sooyoung and Taeyeon went to see if Jonghyun (CN Blue) was feeling better.

"Hi, Jonghyun. What are you doing?" Taeyeon asked

"I'm thinking." Jonghyun replied

"Want to hear some news?" Kyuhyun asked

"What news?" Jonghyun replied

"Sunny is back alive! But, Kangin is dead." Sooyoung said

"Serious!?" Jonghyun asked

"Yes!" Sooyoung said

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Ryeowook, Amber, Hara and Shindong were at the living room.

"What do you want to do?" Ryeowook asked

"I don't know, we can go to the Arcade Room..." Hara said

"Okay, I have nothing to do..." Shindong said

"Okay, we go to the Arcade Room!" Amber said

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Minho was reading books about the mansion to continue his search. And he heard something. The luster was falling. He dodged it. Everyone heard it.

"What is happening here?" Tiffany asked

Everyone saw the broken luster.

"I think that someone is trying to kill me." Minho said

TO BE CONTINUED...

Author's Note:

Hope you liked this chapter. Tell me if there's something wrong. Sorry for Suzy's and Kangin's fan, they died in this chapter. Back to the topic: Who tried to kill Minho? Is the owner will succeed to kill everyone before he get busted? Who will die next? See that by reading the next chapter of The Mansion of Love and Murder!

 

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chesmine #1
Chapter 31: can you make for CNBLUE................please.............
please.please.........please.............i wish you will make a great story for them.......
BoiceKings #2
Why late YoY
I want cnblue
Jiolye
#3
Here's the sequel! A Bite In The Dark!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/262318
HelloPinkPlanet
#4
hurray! :3
kamsa hamnida!
Jiolye
#5
So, here's the results of the votes:
I will make a sequel! And the characters will be...Super Junior, SHINee, 2PM, EXO, f(x), SNSD, KARA and After School!
yoongyoon #6
Yes please make the sequel!
Boys: 2PM, EXO, Super Junior, SHINee
Girls: SNSD, f(x), SISTAR, KARA

Oh and please can you put taecyoon as a couple again? Or 9PM (snsd&2pm) but with taecyoon?
lyre07
#7
What the!It's just a dream!But I love it>.<
Boys:CNBlue,SuperJunior,Exo,Bigabng
Girls:SNSD,After School,f(x),2NE1
Snsdcnblue14
#8
Girls : SNSD , f(x) , after school ,sistar
Boys : CNBLUE , 2pm , big bang , super junior

Pleaseee! The most importnant is SNSD & CNBLUE
By the way your story is great!!!
bimriean
#9
girls:kara,snsd,sistar,4 minute
boys:shinee,suju,2pm,tvxq,bigbang
chocolue #10
Girls: f(x), SNSD, After School (or 4Minute) & Miss A (or SISTAR)
Boys: EXO, Super Junior, SHINee & 2PM

Please have f(x) ~ ^^
Yes make a sequel please!