Temptation of the Innocent

Description

Zhang Liyin wonders into an enchanted garden maze in pursuit of an exquisite prize.

Foreword

A oneshot inspired by the garden mazes in France. May also seem like a spins-off of Snow White, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, The Fall of Man, and may give off some of the feeling of Alice in Wonderland.

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kpoints #1
SUCH BEAUTY! <3
staticdream
#2
weiiii~ if its just begun why does it say completed xD <3s and claps to you. >.> haha I've read the other fic too..Winter Solstice. I liked the future tense..maybe I should have just left a comment there. xD<br />
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but seriously, yay. I feel like this needs a visual representation, not because the words aren't enough, because they are o.o just that I can as easily imagine all the colors running around in spirals xD
dream_keeper88
#3
omo!! that was... a fairytale fanfic. <br />
*claps* bravo, bravo!! *confetti*<br />
you actually transported me inside the labyrinth, like i am an invisible entity, watching liyin ^____________^<br />
i have a feeling that she has a happy ever after with King Junsu (Xiah) ^_^<br />
"all hail the king and queen!"<br />
the apple - reminds me of snow white... and the forbidden fruit in the garden of eden<br />
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kpopartory
#4
This is one fine work, Dani! Superbly done. <br />
I imagined it, and I was there with her,Liyin. <br />
Thank you for sharing it with us.
SpeechofSilence
#5
Doesn't make me sad because I imagine a happy ending where they both are. :D If it's a bad ending, don't you dare speak! *seals Dani's lips with duct tape*<br />
Ah, so it IS quite...hm...how do I say? Intriguing? Suspenseful? Mysterious? Or just plan weird?<br />
But finally got off my to read this and I guess it was worth it. But who does Junsu have to use such weird ways to get Ri In where she is now? I mean, couldn't he have just done something very simple? Eh, I guess I just don't understand things. -_-<br />
But the one-shot was great. :) Very greatly described, master piece from Dani. ;)
JasmineLee #6
ahhh~ i've read it on tumblr!!<br />
but i still don't get who's junsu actually DX