Chapter 2: More YunRi please!

Chapter 1: update soon please

Chapter 1: i was giggled when Yunho kissed Yuri because shock lol
awkward man type is not so Yunho but this is cute <3

Any pairing of hyoyeon please, but not eunhyuk. I'm not a hyohyuk shipper, i'm more of a hyokris :)

- ChangYul.
- Romance.
- Prompt; http://www.kpoplyrics.net/shinee-taemin-u-lyrics-english-romanized.html

Are requests still open? If so could you please do a hyohae? :)
Hyoyeon/Donghae <333
Something about donghae getting jealous of guys around hyo and realizing he's got feelings for her :D I want it to be sweet but with a y ending (no )? Let me know if you can do it or not. Either way thank you! :)

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But aside from that, I feel the Heesica here in this fanfic, and the bitterness I was looking for. Your writing style...absolutely flawless, I'm always amazed with the way you tailored your words. And have i mentioned how I just simply ADORE the last part? Although I'm an Aristocrat, I think the ending is very fitting. I love how you keep them apart though they still have feelings towards each other. I love how this type of ending create that gap inside the reader's heart, but a gap that would be reminisced for a long, long time.

So thank you so much for writing this piece, dear. This fanfic breaks my heart, but makes me smile at the same time ^^

Sorry that i just got the chance to read it now. It's been quite a busy week for me, but I'm glad that I steal the time to read this fic, because this is such a lovely gift. Before I rant on the substance of the story, let me tell you that awwww, I just love you! For writing something that is not even your OTP, for posting it (truth be told, I thought I would never be able to read a heesica fanfic written by you, hehe), for dedicating yourself to this. Thank youuuu!

Okay, now on to the story. i think you manage to incorporate the prompt very well. It's very subtle, and Though the lyric of the song (the prompt) is open to interpretation, I like your intake on this one. This is how i perceive your story: heechul was geting to be the "sinister romantic", and Jessica started to see it. As times passed, however, i think it becomes questionable who is the real sinister romantic.

The plot is simple, but i am glad you keep the simplicity. I like the scenes you used, like when Heesica did the stargazing. Each of the scene has a meaningful (bitter)sweetness in it, it's like reminiscing something that was once there, but no longer there, and that leaves you with empty gaps -but gaps that you would like to remember any day. Though I have to be honest, personally, I think the first part is like a detached part of the fic. I know that Jessica grew tired over Heechul, and eventually got her into this aloof girl that you portrayed on the first 4 paragraphs. Which is perfectly fine, rational, and relatable, but I think it would've been better if you add one or more scenes in which jessica grew cold (because earlier, she had been portrayed as quite a sweet, altruistic woman who would do anything for Heechul). It's just my personal opinion though. [to be continued]

- ChangYoon (Changmin/Yoona)
- Romance, Angst
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