Memories of an Innocent Witness

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About a girl, who witnessed one cruel incident, changing her life drastically and never allowing her to be the same person again.

 

About a boy, who grew up with the love of his father.

Who grew up without the love, let alone the knowledge, of his mother.

And sadly, he grew up with the knowledge of terrible secrets, never witnessing pure, lighthearted childhood.

 

About a man, who lost everything due to one mistake, his love, his family, his home, his life, his soul... left alone with just a newborn child. Bringing up his beloved son and trying to spare the innocent child from the cruelties of the world, trying to protect his son from the bad the father himself was entangled with, while enduring the lifelong commitment as a hard punishment, and it all because of a youth sin.

 

One mistake changing destinies.

 

The girl and the boy, they were childs sharing a deep friendship.

There was mutual, subconscious, pure puppy love, although neither of them realized it, it was something deep down in their souls. It wasn´t affectionate, nor physical, it was innocent and more of a love for siblings. They were too young for the love to bloom. There was endless trust between them, playful meetings, secrets and jokes and magical places just those two knew were shared. They understood and protected each other, together trying to forget the cruelties they had seen and known of at their young age.

 

But one day changed everything, putting them all under their own seperate examinations of life.

One day when a piercing mixture of different voices and sounds could be heard at an abandoned place in the woods, cutting through the air, echoing into the silence. Unfortunately the two children were at the wrong place at the wrong time.

Whatever happened that day, it seperated a father from his son and two souls which maybe perfected each other, breaking a deep friendship.

 

 

Memories of an Innocent Witness

 

You, Alicia Green, were forced to move to America when you were 13 years old.

 

                                                             

 

Originally you lived in Korea, you were born and raised there. 

Your father is American and your mother is Korean, they met in Korea and married.

Now you are 20 years old and doing your bachelor.

 

You miss your old life in Korea...

 

Your life did an about-turn after that day...

 

What happened that you had to immigrate to America?

 

What happened to your best friend?

 

Can you go back?

 

Foreword


Sooo,

HI YOU ;)

This is my first attempt at writing fanfiction, I hope I can find fans... haha.

The "you"-perspective is a new thing I saw for the first time on this website and it´s an entirely different style. It feels like a challenge and I wanted to try this "new thing", that´s why I will use it :).

I need to say, that this may be a bit different than other fanfictions (at least from what I have read).

I want to make it kind of realistic and so it will be pretty detailed (some stuff probably requires research). As a fanfic, I really don´t know if it can be realistic at all, so no promises, but I´ll try. And maybe you should bring some patience for the beginning, because it starts a bit slow. Otherwise, I believe the story will be worth it.

You can also check this out, if you like. It´s about Lu Han and Sehun ;)

"Pink Lips, Rosy Cheeks, Long Lashes, Sparkling Eyes"

 I WILL LOVE the ones who will give my story a chance, I hope I don´t disappoint... Shalala...

However, enjoy reading~~~ :D 

 

Ai_Hasu
(09.03.13) - Witness - Revamped all chapters (since my writing improved a little), put chpt. 4/5/6 together now and posted chpt. 7, which is chpt. 5 now, ENJOY!

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planningk
#1
Chapter 7: Good story (=
I-am-bored
#2
Chapter 7: "El Dorado" (this boy looked very feminine)" Ok, I think Alica and I need a little conversation. (CHANYEOL IS MANLY AS ____ ヽ(≧Д≦)ノHAVE U HEARD HIS VOICE (ok not in the teaser)??? HAVE U SEEN HIS ARMS ??? DA ____ IS WRONG WITH YOU ??? AND NO, I'M NOT MAD, IT'S JUST THAT I HAVE A LOT OF EXO FEELS, OK.
I swear all Exo do is being at airports, even in fanfics hehehe. Alicia seems to have really nice friends. I'm curious to know what's going to happen next. Good luck and fighting for the next update n_n Don't pressure yourself and never forget : you're a warmchine <3
ayobro
#3
Chapter 7: okay, this looks really promising... I have the feeling something big is planned behind this all?
your writing is definitely good (and your chapters are huge in comparison to most of the stories here...)
I hope to see more updates now that she knows who Exo is :)
I also hope cool things happen when she goes back to Korea, keep it up. Imo you´re really good!!
fa6o0om #4
Chapter 7: WOOOOW you writing is very interesting and you can be a talented writer in the future,,,, i read al the chapters that you have and they where all very INTERESTING,,, :) >< Ill be looking forward to you new stories,,, <3 ,hheeehehe..
I-am-bored
#5
Chapter 6: You updated ! YAY ! :D
SUUUUUUUSHIIIIIIIIS ! This made me so hungry, you have no idea ;_;
So she's going to Korea. At first, I thought she was sick or something (oh wait, maybe this is why she came in the USA ? o_o) so I'm relieved she's fine. n_n
I'm looking forward to know what's going to happen next and who's "him" (even though i have a little idea :p).
Great update, peanut ! Can't wait for the next one !
I-am-bored
#6
Chapter 5: Another awesome chapter ! :D Aaah a cliffhanger ! I wonder what is going to happen and what is the big decision will be about. I can't wait but it's fine take your time ;)
I-am-bored
#7
Chapter 4: It's so mysterious, I like it :'D ! I can't wait to know more about the doctor, ect... huhuhu I'm so curious(YEAH!) ! I hope you'll update soon ! Fighting ~!