Hmm... I didn't really understand what was going on half the time because I was only focusing on when the name Chanyeol comes up. BTW, I love the name Yongchan. Seems like that'll be a cute name for a son. =)

Puhahahaha!! I was laughing all the time, but only because I know it's you.

It's okay but it needs a lot of im,proving, mwahaha! There are some misspells and grammar mistakes so, be more aware.