Calling Kakurine039
|| ☁ Sweet Bubble Shop☁ || Closed Down
Title 4/5
Very Original, never heard one quite like it although,
i do not see the connection to the story
Description/Foreword 8/10
I got a little confused at the end of the foreword but other
then that, it was well written.
Appearance 9/10
Tne background made me abit dizzy but other then that. It was
neat and tidy, the way everyone want it.
Originality/Creativity/Plot 23/25
For me, vampire fanfiction is overrated but this story is an
exception. Fantasic twist that make this story unique and
fairly original
Writing Style/Format/Grammar/Spelling 25/25
Characterization 22/25
Extra 10/10
101/110
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