This was beautiful. Really! I loved how you used not only words but actions to really characterize Suho. I also loved how you explained thoroughly how the lotus pond was meaningful to him. On the first paragraph, I was mesmerized by the imagery you created. I felt as if I could see and imagine everything that was going on. One advice though: I loved the whole story, but I suggest you use hyphens or something to let the readers know when you are changing the scenarios. It would be more understandable than using more indents to separate them. That's all I have to say! Keep up the great work (: