「Abandoned」Wings

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Onew is an angel. He knew that flying isn't that great, it really isn't, trust him he knew. Sometimes you just wanted to fall. So he did. But there's always something at the end of the fall. My entry for http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/215291/only-onew-contest-contest-onew-shinee

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Chapters Completed: 4/9

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Agent15
#1
Chapter 4: This would be a really cool book
ZoeChaomaniac #2
OMO DARK ONEW ME LIKIE<3 please update :'( ur fans are vey sad. If it goes to extreme....I will have no choice....but to SPAM YOUNNNMUAHAHAHAH
LucyIncredible
#3
Who's duck?? Ahh Update Soon~
Emmauk26
#4
OMO, Onew, I hope he's gonna be ok, and doesn't get hurt, plus his power is really cool, I hope that he'll still have his wings and power when he's on earth, but obviously be able to hide his wings, keke, can't wait for more, update really soon. <3 <3 ;-P
Emmauk26
#5
I love how you describe how Onew sees heaven, I don't blame him for wanting out; can't wait for more.
weirdo_with_love
#6
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:O wow, I hope he doesn't crash down completely and hurt himself badly, that would be HORRIBLE, but it's really good! nice job!
ciroxc
#7
I like how you wrote about the contrast between black and white, and then gave Onew's opinion on it. I think that it was really well done :)
Emmauk26
#8
keke, this sounds really good, I've been thinking of doing my own Onew is an angel sort of fic, need to finish the ones I'm writing though first; ;-( can't wait for this, I normally only read OnTae but Onew is my bias so I'm gonna try it, update soon.
ciroxc
#9
Onew is an angel <3 xDD
eexiee
#10
Excited!