Yah, I love you... NOT?

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Once you start to read this story, you have entered the world of Kristine Wilson, also known as Park Mina. Who is Mina, you ask? Me. I'm a transfer student from the States. I was born in the U.S and was raised into a fine young lady by my Korean mother, Park Miyoung and my American dad, William Wilson. So it seems quiet obvious that Park Mina is my Korean name, right? No need for any further explanation?

Wanting to fulfill my mother's wish, I enrolled into Kangin High in Seoul, Korea. I moved away from home only to soon have to encounter the enemy of my life, Kim Myung Soo a.k.a L and the love of my life, Lee Jang Woo

 

 <---This is for people who are curious about what i look like :)

Shall I introduce myself properly first? OK

 

Name: Kristine Wilson

Ethnicity: Half White, half Korean

Age: 16

D.O.B: March 22, 1996

Hometown: Seattle, United States.

Favorite color: Green, blue, pink.

Favorite food: Pizza, kjs@knu!#$%

 

I don't really get why you need to know this but I think that's how much you probably only need to know about me to understand my story. 

This is Kim Myung Soo, the enemy of my life. See that face? Pretty right? But I have to warn you, get away from him, he's an evil kid. Remember this face and run whenever you catch a sight of it... I'm being serious!

 

This is Lee Jang Woo, the love of my life. See that face? Cold right? But he has the prettiest smile and warmest heart. <3 When you see this face, please look away, because HE'S MINE!

 

Let's go?

Foreword

2 Days before school.

"Daddy? I just arrived at school." I pulled my luggage behind me as I took a few unsteady steps up the steep hill. 

"I thought I told you to call me as soon as you get off the plane."

"I had to take out the luggage and then try to catch the taxi. I forgot. I'm sorry, daddy." I whined a little, adding a cute little giggle to ease my dad's worries. One hand pulling with suit case and the other hold the phone, I made my way up to my new life in Korea. It was already pretty rough and difficult since the beginning. For a moment, I wondered how I will survive.

"Poor girl. I told you that I could go with you."

"Daddy. It's ok. I'm 16 now. I'm not a little girl anymore. I can take care of myself now." I tried to ensure my dad that I will be fine because the fact is, I will. No one can bring down this mighty Kristine.

"I get it. i get it. OK. You are not a little girl any more but you are still a little girl in my eyes." My dad makes these kissy sounds that are just simply unbearable.

"Ok dad. Well, this little girl has to get off the phone to go talk to the administrators of the school." I saw the gate! It's the gate that will lead my to my new happy, independent life in Korea.

"Ok. Take care. Call me as soon as possible, ok?"

"Ok daddy! Love you." I skipped toward the gate as I gave my daddy a kiss through the phone. I hung up the phone when...

I thought I hit a wall. But a wall in the middle of the road is just impossible. Plus, I believe that I have 20/20 vision, there would be no way that I could have missed that big wall in front of me. Anyways, I bounced off the "wall" and fell straight back on my . 

"At least look where you walk." A guy spoke. So I guessed it wasn't a wall after all. It was just some punks walking around, BLIND. 

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foodgasm
#1
Chapter 3: update soon!!
Rini6189
#2
Chapter 3: It's good that Mina is able to make at least one friend on her first day of school. The boy spells trouble wherever he goes that it's best to not hang around him. To approach her like that, it sounds like he may be even a little interested in Mina. Since she's never heard of him before, it's not likely that she knows him like he expects. Mina is really new to the school and doesn't know anything going on at school. On the day when she arrived at the school to get her enrollment stuff straightened out, she did manage to take him by surprise for responding to him in English and Korean. That must be the first time that he's experienced getting boldly confronted by a girl. He seems to be aware of Mina's infatuation towards Jangwoo. There's something about him that seems to give Mina the shivers--like something about him is not quite right. It is sickening to see those impure girls practically throwing themselves at the guys in desperation.
Rini6189
#3
Chapter 2: It is hard to adjust to a different time zone when one is so used to the one back in his/her home country. Lucky for Mina, her aunt came prepared. Things seen in dramas can be different from reality since what's presented on screen tend to be stereotypical. He must be amused at seeing her warmly greet the teachers that he couldn't help but let out a slight chuckle. Jangwoo is tough on students about proper behavior. Because of his coldness, he's the type that one wouldn't want to mess around with. It's going to be hard for her since the "rude guy" isn't making things easy for her.
Rini6189
#4
Chapter 1: The one whom Kristine dubbed "rude boy" is either just plain disrespectful or has something against the teacher to not bow his respect. It looks like she'd fit in just fine because of her fluency in Korean. While he was giving her a tour of the school, she was too distracted with gushing over him to listen to a word he's saying. It's like he was in a hurry to get it over and done with because he didn't slow down to explain some things to help her get familiar with the school. She obviously seems to be into him. However, he doesn't seem interested. The way that he responded to her outburst could be him showing that he's weirded out by her. Maybe it's just that her aunt has such good taste, being the more hip and modern-styled one, to be able to pick out something that fitting of her niece's style.

One word that you have misspelled is "unfamiliar," which you spelled as "unfimiliar." There's also the improper usage of the word "quiet" whre "quite" is meant to be used.
Rini6189
#5
This is definitely one of those not-so-typical romance stories. It's good to see something that's not cliche. It'll be interesting to see how all the characters play into it.

He is a concerned father to be checking up on his daughter to see whether she arrived there all right.It's not that she isn't careful. The guys seemed to be the ones who weren't watching where they're going.
pinkpanther1017
#6
Just thought I'd drop by and ask if you were going to continue this story. I'm actually a fan of Lee Jang Woo so finding a story with him on AFF was really refreshing ^_^ Of course I like L too ;)
Yerlie1001 #7
Let the games begin for this skool yr...^^
pinkpanther1017
#8
You've got me interested so far! Can't wait till next update :)