「NOKEE-O ● REVIEWS」✰ //OPEN//

Description

Now, remember Pinocchio, be a good writer. And always let your reviewers be your guide.

 

Pinocchio is known for having a short nose that grows longer when he is under stress, especially when telling a lie. He gains wisdom through misadventures which leads him to become a real boy for his good deeds. We are here to guide you like Pinocchio. We will give advice on how your writing can be better. We are not grammar nazi's. We just want to help you as a writer. You can say we are like 'The Talking Cricket' or 'The Blue Fairy' that guides Pinocchio closer to his dream. 

 
 
 
 
「featured story」

 

Every 2 weeks, a story choosen by both reviewers will be featured. 

 

「rules」
 
 

o1. Subscribe to us before requesting.

o2. You must have at least 50% of your story written or have at least 5 chapters. We also review one-shots if it is at least 50% completed.

o3. We do not read any /yuri fanfiction. Sorry. 

o4. Pleace give us at least 48 hours to check our inboxes. If your request is still not on the "status" section by then, feel free to contact us.

o5. There is no password. Just kidding, the password is "I am a donkey."

o6. Do not bash us because we are not haters -- we are reviewers.

o7. Do not bash the other writers because you are not the reviewers here. Only we can bash them if their story deserves it.

o8. Just because your first language is not English does not mean we'll be too lenient. Remember, we are here to help you, not play around with you.

o9. Please be patient. We have lives outside of 「NOKEE-O ● REVIEWS」and we have our own stories to write as well. Also, highlight rule number five. 

1o. Once we finish reviewing, link our review in your story. It can be linked anywhere in your story whether it be in your foreword or one of the chapters. Afterwords, comment with the link of the foreword or chapter. If you do not credit, you will be automatically blacklisted.

11. If you bash us or rush us, you will be warned. After two warnings, we will blacklist you.

12. You can request from other shops, we do not mind. 

13. You cannot cancel if we have already "opened" your story.

14. If you have read all the rules and want to submit your story to be reviewed, click here!

 

「rubric」
 

Title (5 pts)

Foreword/Description (5 pts)

Creativity/Originality (20 pts)

Plot/Drive (25 pts)

Characterization (15pts)

Style/Format (5pts)

Grammar/Spelling (10 pts)

Overall Enjoyment (15 pts)

Total of 100 points.

 

Optional Bonus:

Appearance (5 pts)

 
 
 

 
 

Foreword

Opened: 6/21/12
Total Stories Reviewed: -
Ended: -
Theme: Pinocchio ft. Exo
 
 
© LPianoKeys & greentealatte_
Resources: icondeposit, tumblr, youtube, livejournal, google
Thank you SM Ent. for Exo. Sadly we do not own them.

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500sunny500
#1
Chapter 2: Um, hi there. I wanted to know if this place was still alive...
hyo_jinki
#2
Hi. I want to cancel my review request. Thank you. :)
LPianoKeys #3
Thank you to everyone that has sent in requests! Everything is pending right now because I am waiting to talk to Latte. Latte lives on the other side of the world so the time we talk, plan, and decide on who will review what etc, is sometimes difficult to find.

Thank you to all who have closely read the rules~ We will begin reviewing very soon! :D
kpopluvr18
#4
I requested for a review :D
-laugh #5
I requested ^^
hyo_jinki
#6
I've requested. Hope you would accept! ^^