The Review Shop

Description

Once upon a time, there was a girl who read too many stories. She made comments, telling authors what she loved about each chapter, every character and even their plots. But she noticed that authors skipped her comments. They bypassed her loving words infavor of comments like "OMG!!!! I LOVE DIS. UPDATE SOON!!!!1!", "PLZ UPDATE." and "Here for karma."

She felt neglected. She wanted a way to tell authors how she felt--in a way that would make them appriciate what she had to say. So she decided to open a shop.

A shop where she would read authors stories and give them her opinions. She would tell them what she loved, what she hated, what was confusing and what should really be fixed.

Thus; TRS was born. 

Foreword

Welcome To The Review Shop

Welcome to The Review Shop (TRS)! Here you can request for your story(ies) to be thoroughly read and reviewed! Your story can be reviewed on plot, character development, flow, grammar--hell, anything you want to be reviewed, will be reviewed.

 

 Admin A is available for reviews.

 

As time goes on, Admin A would love to add more people to help review; Apply by message to the account MiddSummer!

 

Here Are The Rules

Here are some basic rules for TRS: (I've underlined and colored for speed readers)

1. Please, be polite.

2. Apply using the form below in the comments; don't spam Admin A with messages. If you send one to her box, she will delete it on sight.

3. All reviews will be posted as separate stories. Once your review is completed you'll be messaged a URL specifically for your account. This way, there is a separate space for you and any Admin who reviews your story(ies) to have discussions. (If this is confusing, don't worry. It will be explained more in the form section!)

4. You can ask for a review more than once. Didn't like Admin ?'s review of your story? Ask for another from a different Admin.

5. Don't hate if you are given a "bad review". You asked for an opinion and you got one. Be nice and accept that some people may not like your stories.

6. All types of stories are accepted here. Any band, any fandom, and pairing.

 

The Form

At TRS each Admin can have their own way of reviewing a story. Admin A, for example uses her own form to review stories as she reads them.

When you submit the following form; please note that even though your comment may not be replied to directly, your story will still be reviewed. When your review is complete you will recieve a URL that will link you to a "story" here on AFF. Your review will be in that "story". There will be one "story" per account that applies here; that way, if you wanted your story reviewed again, or if you wanted a completely new story reviewed, it will be posted as a new "chapter" in that "story". Although it sounds complicated, it's quite simple once you have it all down. :]

Please copy and paste the following into the comments fully filled out. If it is not complete, TRS will not review your story.

User Name:

Type of Story (Oneshot, Twoshot, Chaptered Fic, Song Fic, You fic, etc.):

Name of Story:

URL of Story:

Band/Fandom:

Genre(s) of Story:

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG):

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed:

Anything else you'd like to add:

 

The List of The Reviwed

(Click on Chapter 2 to see the stories that are being reviwed and those that have been reviwed)

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Inspirit7_love #1
User Name:Inspirit7_love

Type of Story: Chaptered fic

Name of Story: That Pair of Eyes...

URL of Story:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/385137/that-pair-of-eyes-angst-fluff-ljoe-romance-teentop-you-byunghun

Band/Fandom: Teen Top

Genre(s) of Story: Angst & Fluff

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG): PG

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: The flow of the story and the way I express the characters' thoughts and emotions

Anything else you'd like to add: Nope.
redocean-
#2
Username: redocean-

Type of story (Oneshot, Twoshot, Chaptered Fic, Song Fic, You fic, etc.): Chaptered fic

Name of Story: Emulsion of Wings

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/467841/emulsion-of-wings-angst-romance-himchan-jongup-bap

Band/Fandom: B.A.P

Genre(s) of Story: Angst, Romance

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG): PG

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: the plot of the story and my writing style

Anything else you'd like to add: English is not my first language so please bear with my grammatical mistakes :-)
R3G1N3
#3
User Name: R3G1N3

Type of Story (Oneshot, Twoshot, Chaptered Fic, Song Fic, You fic, etc.): Chaptered Fic

Name of Story: No Way, Right?

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/361701/no-way-right-romcom-schoollife-taemin-you-exok-kai-kris

Band/Fandom: Exo I guess

Genre(s) of Story: Romance, Comedy

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG): 13

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: Writing Techniques, how I lead the story

Anything else you'd like to add: Please write me a good review ^.^
kyouyas
#4
User Name: kpoplistener

Type of Story chaptered fic

Name of Story: Aish! That Jung Daehyun!

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/249776/aish-that-jung-daehyun-yongguk-zelo-jongup-bap-daehyun-youngjae-kimnamjoo

Band/Fandom: B.A.P/BABY

Genre(s) of Story: fluff

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG): PG

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: Characterization and grammar please

Anything else you'd like to add: Thank you so much in advance! English is my first language :)
Super_SHINEe13 #5
User Name: Super_SHINEe13

Type of story: Oneshot

Name of Story: Home

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/226634/home-angst-oneshot-exo-kyungsoo

Band/Fandom: EXO K- D.O.

Genre(s) of Story: angst, tragedy

Rating of Story: PG-13

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: Sentence structure, too much description?, flow, plot ( too cliche?). Is it too lengthy or tedious? Did I convey the right emotions properly? Any other corrections I need to fix whether grammar, or anything else I'm lacking.

Anything else you'd like to add: It's my first time to write serious angst so I'm not confident if I wrote it correctly. Should I continue writing angst? Do you have any tips for me to improve my writing skills? Some people are also asking for a sequel. Should I write one or would it be over doing it too much? Open to any suggestions and constructive criticism.

Sorry for demanding too much! >//_//< Thank you!!!
Kallen_Langely
#6
User Name: Kallen_Langely

Type of Story: Short story (6 chapters)

Name of Story: Little Quirks

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/207558/little-quirks-comedy-romance-originalcharacter-exo-chanyeol

Band/Fandom: EXO

Genre(s) of Story: Romance, comedy

Rating of Story: PG

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: Characterization, flow, sentence structure (i.e. are they too long sometimes?), details (are there sometimes too many?)

Anything else you'd like to add: Readers have been asking for a sequel, but I'm not sure... Would you want a sequel to this?

Many thank you's in advance~ ^^
MissyKuromie
#7
User Name: MissyKuromie

Type of Story (Oneshot, Twoshot, Chaptered Fic, Song Fic, You fic, etc.): Chaptered (Very Long)

Name of Story: White World

URL of Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/218346/white-world-daesung-daragon-fantasy-jiyong-seungri-sandara-bigbang2ne1

Band/Fandom: Big Bang (Specifically Daragon, GD X Sandara)

Genre(s) of Story: Fantasy, Romance

Rating of Story (M/R/PG-13/PG): PG-13. Minor cussing and will be blood later, but no or f-bombs.

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed: Overall enjoyability of the story. Did it pull you in? Did you enjoy reading it? I want to know so I can improve on things readers did or didn't like in future stories and updates!

Anything else you'd like to add: The fic is quite long so... I don't mind if you take more time to review it. It's 10 chapters right now, but each chapter can be quite long (the latest bring about 15 pages on MS word 11 font) so if you can't make it through the whole thing if it doesn't grab your interest, just message me and I'll get back to ya. Thank you!
BlessedHeart
#8
User Name: TheLaughingKirby

Type of Story: Chaptered Fic,

Name of Story:To Kill A Lover

URL of Story:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/212208/to-kill-a-lover-angst-violence-exo-kai-t

Band/Fandom:
Kai and some EXO K and M
Genre(s) of Story: angst, drama

Rating of Story: PG-13

What you would specifically like looked at or reviewed:
honesty :) please tell me what i need to improve

Anything else you'd like to add: nothing

thanks in advance!

i changed my username that's why I comment again. sorry!
calmchaos
#9
Oh, thankyouu! That's pretty quick of you. :D It makes me feel nervous, though. xD

Aha, if you ever want another reviewer, by the way, I'd be glad to help. >.>