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Sunny White and Several Elephants by amusingmurdermachine
Reviewed by: SHINeeRoxx
Title (5/5)
The title, to me, was quite amusing, I've never seen anything like that before, so I'll give you points for creativity. If I were just a reader and not a reviewer, and I happen to come upon this oneshot, I will be rather interested as the title was eye-catching and seeks a reader's attention.
Description and Foreword (-/10)
There wasn't a foreward or description as it was a oneshot collection.
Graphics (7/10)
At first, I had expected you to use the same graphics for all the oneshots, but when I really looked through the chapters, they were all of different posters/pictures. However, me, being a grammar-freak, immediately noticed a grammar mistake on your poster. You said "Have you wondered in fairytales what the princes feel?" and to improve it you can put "Have you ever wondered what fairytale princes feel?". And it might be better if you have the poster related more to the oneshot.
Plot (5/5)
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