Tears

Description

It's killing him from the inside out, even the doctor states so. Hee Chul lost the will to live after Hankyung left and he had at most another week to live. The other members are trying to spend his numbered days together happily, but could the intense pain in his heart allow so? He rejected the option to ask Hankyung back to see him when asked, and when the members eventually took actions, would it be too late? 

Foreword

This is my first time writing a fanfiction and it's about Hanchul! But just to warn you all, I haven't finish writing it yet, but it will most likely end up in a sad ending.

 Do comment about it, thanks:)

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injeong
#1
Chapter 13: Oh man it's been so long since I cried like this
I read the first ending and was like "Oh sht this was a happy ending ... It's gonna end on a sad ending???" And then I spent like five whole minutes just scrolling up and down the last ending without reading my mind was like
Read it!
No! Do you want your heart shattered??
Read it!!!
Noooo!!
Yes!!!
Don't!!!!
Do!!!!
And then I was like "oh f it I'm reading it," I SHOULDN'T HAVE I'M CRYING
I AM SO FREAKING MAD RIGHT NOW
I DON'T KNIW WHO I'M MAD AT
BUT I AM FIZZING MAD
I'M GONNA EXPLODE
WHYYYYY *sobs* you evil authornim can't let a reader die happily can you
BUT THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING OMG OFF TO READ THE SEQUEL AND HOPE TO DEATH NO-ONE ELSE DIES TOO
Kyeo-Baby-Min #2
Chapter 13: I also like the second ending better (sad)

Don't get me wrong! I love Hanchul and I love Heechul and to kill him off is really not my thing and Hannie.... He joins too? That's just not what I like but for the story's sake...

It feels more natural and more of what all of what happened was leading up to. That's why I can't say I dislike it.

The first ending (happy) Feels a bit just off... Sure a miracle happened but still it's just feels off, like something was missing from it.

Good story though I enjoyed it.
Kyeo-Baby-Min #3
Chapter 13: I also like the second ending better (sad)

Don't get me wrong! I love Hanchul and I love Heechul and to kill him off is really not my thing and Hannie.... He joins too? That's just not what I like but for the story's sake...

It feels more natural and more of what all of what happened was leading up to. That's why I can't say I dislike it.

The first ending (happy) Feels a bit just off... Sure a miracle happened but still it's just feels off, like something was missing from it.

Good story though I enjoyed it.
mysterycodes #4
Chapter 13: Great story.Love it. <3
crimson_xy #5
@Missladybug I did write a happy one, it starts from chapter 10 and ends at chapter 11. Looks like it's not happy enough to be considered as a happy ending? Still, glad that you enjoyed the story. ;)
HeechulsGurl007
#6
yeah i hate you now -_- i hate sad endings.
though the second ending made me cry, it was well written, even though i hate sad endings.
you should do an alternitve ending, like a happy one.
maybe that's just me, i mean some people like sad endings.
i don't.
but it was a good story. i enjoyed it
crimson_xy #7
Thank you all for your comments! @SaranghaeSujuChullie, I like the second ending better too. I think I can't really write happy endings, I couldn't get the emotions across. But still, glad you like the sad ending!:) @Imcassielf, thank you for commenting, I'm so happy that you liked it:)
Btw, I'm writing a new story about Minwook, do help support me by reading and commenting about it.Thanks! :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/230901/blossoming-love-minwook
SaranghaeSuJuChullie
#8
TTATT Normally, I don't cry... But...(bawling in a corner) TTATT

Personally, I like the second ending better (sad one), even though it is kinda depressing... It has more emotions... wow, I'm thinkin' waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too deep into this, aren't I? XD
Awesome fic! Hanchul 4ever! <3
imcassielf #9
this was so beautiful i cried so hard TT
thankyou for sharing this ! TT
HeechulsGurl007
#10
omo Heechul come back to Hannie >< thank so much for updating so fast, this chapter made me cry. ahh update soon neh? it's getting good now!