Berry Reviews! ★ [OPEN]

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Berry Reviews! ★

Welcome to |Berry Reviews!| ; Receive reviews for your stories here! I read a lot and sometimes, even in well-written books, you can find some errors. Therefore, I came onto this platform; whether you are a professional writer or not, you are given the same opportunities to write. And I'm sure you, writers, want someone to point out the errors in your story you, yourself, can't seem to find; I'll be more than happy to do it for you. I realized there are many of these kind of services offered. But fret not, you are able to request from most of them (if it's not against their rule) cause it is definitely not against my rule to request from many shops! You need to improve right? I am definitely not biased although I do like a specific band in the k-pop industry. Just follow some rules and I will write your review in no time! 


 

Rules; 

-Subscribe to this thread so you will know the updates | No subscription; no review

-You must credit the shop and the reviewer | A lil' credit should be given for the time and effort | There must be linkage

-Please do not rush; you need a good detailed review right? 

-Comment after you've submitted the form and after you've picked up your review

-Password is berrylicious (State in 'Have you read the rules?') 

Happy Requesting! 

Click for the form 


Rubric;

You will be judged on the following:

Title

Are the title and chapter titles attractive and appropriate? Are the original? Do they reflect the story well?

Plot 

Is the plot well-developed? Is there a specific storyline? Is it captivating and interesting? Is it relevant? Is it original?

Flow

Is the story well-paced? Is it disconnected due to the lack of proper connectors? Do the sentences flow?

Language

Is there use of grammar? Is your vocabulary wide-ranged? Is the writing style mature and distinctive?

Characters 

Are your characters realistic? Are the characters original and interesting? Do they evoke emotions?

Neatness and Attractiveness 

This includes your foreword, graphics and the font of your story. Is your foreword neat, with no words scattered around? Is your graphics relevant and well-made? Is the font good and neat (preferably arial or times)? Do you do excessive things like changing to weird colours or italicizing for no particular reason?

Enjoyment

Did I enjoy your story? Will readers enjoy your story? 

Basically, I will just give you a grade like A, B, C or F. 


Berry Reviews! ★ Notice Board; 

1. Offically opened on 11th June 2012

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

Foreword

Navigations;

Chapter 1: Reviews Directory ( Status List plus links to all reviews)

Chapter 2: Reccomended

 

 

 

 

Comments

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AnnPark #1
Submitted a request~ Sorry that the first one I send you is my longest fic (27 chapters ;P) but it is complete & the chapters aren't very long so....have fun XD
Kim_Hanyu
#2
Submitted a request~
Fighting!