Love and its consequences.

Description

"I have someone I like, so sorry I can't go out with you.' Is the most hated sentence for Song Ji Hyo. And the second most hated sentence just pisses her off too! "Let's still just be friends, okay?" Why? Why do these two sentences boil her insides to the fact where she would be able to cook herself up! Because every single time she asks a guy out, they reject her flat out. All she wants is to fall in love, and she will do anything for it. Anything...even have a cupid disguise themselves as a human to help her get the man of her dreams. Precisely! Song Ji Hyo's life turns up side down when she finds out that a cupid was assigned to her, and will help her fall in love! But there are some consequences to it, what happens if Song Ji Hyo ends up falling for the cupid itself!? Because the cupid, looks exactly like SHINee's maknae Lee Taemin...or maybe, it is him.

Foreword

OMG, I just found out a very good fan fiction story, so here it is!

LOL, I just wanted to write it down straight away in case I forget D:

PLEASE COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE! :D

And stay in tuned for more :)

ANOTHER BIG THANK YOU TO ANGELA FOR THE POSTER!

I requested a second time because I really love their work ^____^

http://lemonswirls.beloved.nu/

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smilingeyes #1 Mar 31, 2011 02:27:08

thank you guys! ^____^ 
I really wish I can update soon, T^T.. I feel so bad. 
HWAITING, HOLIDAYS PLEASE COME BY FASTER!

beautifulpetal #2 Feb 11, 2011 05:18:46

YENNY i read the first chapter, LOL

inlovevi #3 Feb 3, 2011 05:34:41

I really love this fanfic! its sooooo cute!>_<

gianni #4 Jan 30, 2011 07:48:03

nice poster by the way yenyen ! 
very y indeed ;D

gianni #5 Jan 30, 2011 07:47:25

UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH :D 
update update MORE 
I WANT MY BRAIN TO EAT MORE WORDS OF MORE CHAPTERS :D 
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA ^^

smilingeyes #6 Jan 28, 2011 02:55:25

Rini6189: Thank you for spotting those out! ^____^

Rini6189 #7 Jan 28, 2011 02:43:56

That's one nice-looking story poster. It's cute. The monarch butterfly is a nice touch. I don't think the chapter is too short. I agree with Ji Hyo that the situation seems surreal, especially with Taemin as a spiritual being having angel wings. It's like waking up to a fantasy world. Good job on the descriptions. It's sweet how Taemin cares for her well-being. Finding her the right guy definitely won't be an easy task. Though, Taemin being Cupid doesn't seem to click because he's not using the power in forcing anybody to fall in love. It looks like he'll be trying to play matchmaker. 
 
Here are some mistakes that I've spotted in Chapter Four: 
 
1. I then looked at Taemin, hoping he would give me an answer, something to sooth my aching heart. 
Correction: I then looked at Taemin hoping that he would give me an answer, something to soothe my aching heart. 
 
2. And he insisted as he pulled down my hand and soon enough were falling. 
Correction: He insisted as he pulled down my hand. Soon enough, we're falling. 
* A sentence beginning with a conjunction like "and" is a fragment. 
 
3. I headed towards the girls toilet and decided to wash my face. But the temperature wasn’t going down. 
Correction: I headed towards the girls' toilet and decided to wash my face, but the temperature wasn't going down.

smilingeyes #8 Jan 27, 2011 22:51:38

iNonna: Thankyou! :D 
jumpingfrog: Sure, will do ^___^! 
reena_a_shinee: HAHAHA, yeah I wonder what's going to happen 8D 
taemin_lover23: ahahha :3! 
iNonna: LOL, I don't nkow how I update soo much .____. LOL 
mc_cwiss: LOLOLOL, SAME HERE xD 
Rini6189: wow, you're comment really motivated me to write more. Thank you so very much, you seem to be very good at writting. I hope one day you will write your own fan fictions, because I will be sure to subscribe to them :)! 
CrimsonAngel: Ehehehehe, you have to wait and find out ;D!

CrimsonAngel #9 Jan 25, 2011 21:59:59

So is she suposed to fall for tamein? Or what? (:

Rini6189 #10 Jan 24, 2011 05:35:29

This is one interesting original storyline I've come across. It's okay that the first few chapters are short since it's the beginning where not much is expected to happen yet. Ji Hyo's lucky to have a friend like Yu Jin who's willing to stick with her through tough times no matter what--a true friend indeed. Guys like Bob who reject her like that aren't worth it. They're so superficial by only focusing on the girl's appearance rather than the heart, which is not true love. They don't seem to be the type to care anyway. It's something they'll never be able to understand. You portray the characters' emotions well. Weird... I'm kind of reminded of the anime/manga, YuYu Hakusho, except that there won't be demons or other supernatural beings here. I wonder how Taemin will go about helping her.