Himchamnesia [On Hiatus]

- Rated because of language, abuse, and ual situations.
- I've added 2 years to each of their ages. I felt like this would be awkward if I made Zelo 15.
- I'll be using the first 6 chapters to sort of introduce each character. When certain details about somebody are added in the story, I'll add them to their descriptions above.
- When I write whole paragraphs in italics during a chapter, it means it's a flashback/memory.
- If I just write a sentence or two in italics, it means that person is thinking to themself.

- Amazing poster + background by kimxbb @ Fateful Dreamer.

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This will be my first time dealing with writing an angsty story, so I apologize in advance if it's bad at the beginning.
Hopefully, as time goes on, it'll come naturally to me.

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whatevaman #1 Jun 24, 2013 19:09:57

I'll wait for you to update so get well soon! New subbie by the way! :)

strangeneko #2 May 3, 2013 00:50:27

Chapter 9: Hello new subbie here, I like this story, I hope you can continue to update soon author-nim ! Fighting !

ahhhhbap #3 Mar 9, 2013 11:19:55

Chapter 9: I love this its so freaking cute!! :) great story here! :L

M_Seungri #4 Feb 14, 2013 19:58:59

Chapter 8: new reader here \o/

BloodyValentines #5 Oct 23, 2012 10:26:44

Chapter 8: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaahhh! I love it! I have cried...maybe like 4903256 times already xD I loved the note Yongguk left Himchan, that was sooo sweet! His rambling about maybe him having ADHD was cute :D

But seriously though, beautiful! Cant wait for next chapterr! <3

Mangoo #6 Sep 24, 2012 11:09:28

Chapter 8: Hihihihihi <3<3<3<3<3
You're welcome :D

Himchans story was so heartbreaking, I didn't expect that at all, but that explains the scar, that he has on his thigh, yea :(
I can't imagine what he went through, how traumatized he is, how much he blames himself for what happened on that day, his sister died.
I like the part, where you counted the time period to discribe the time, that went by with each action. It was so thrilling to read at first, but it got sadder with each sentence...I felt so sorry for him, that he not only lost his mother but now his sister as well. That he is reminded of it not once a year at the anniversary of their deaths but every single time he looks at the scar...so sad :´(

And....Yongguk's letter was so dorky and cute haha xD
I'm excited how this goes on, now that Himchan accepted to play the lead roles. And how everyone will meet :>

Keep up the good work, author-nim <3

brainboxes #7 Sep 24, 2012 00:09:15

Chapter 8: I have to say that every time I see this fic updates, I get excited. You're one of the few writers I actually like and wow I love this story so much. Just, augh, BangHim yes perfect wonderful. Keep being great.

Mangoo #8 Sep 1, 2012 10:01:16

(part 2. OTL sry, got at my character limit T-T')
The reason why it's my favorite, is because of the scene with Himchan on Yongguk's lap. Not because it was super cute and I'm such a fangirl (LOL) but because there were parts in it,...the way you wrote amazed me!!! Because of Yongguk's previous chapter, the reader kind of knows, how Yongguk feels about Himchan...Because of this, everything Himchan feels is like a reflection what Yongguk feels...like how Yongguk's breath against his ear makes him shiver, just like his breath against his neck makes yongguk probably shiver as well. Or how he misses yongguks hand around his waist, when he let's go for a moment, just like Himchan's head resting on yongguks neck, when he looks up for the pinky swear (that's actually super cute as well, that they always do that xD)
I don't know, even though it's in Himchan's POV, it was still so well written, every little action and movement was like....I knew why...Oh my xD I can't describe it, I just loved it xD

I'm sry I wrote so much. I didn't meant to at first, but I felt like, I should write about each chapter, because everything was so well written, and I...feel bad that I only found this fanfic now and not sooner, but..I'm still glad I found it (better late then never xD)
Even though there are still some things that are confusing and I have no answer for it now (like the scar on himchans tight?) but I'm excited to find everything out, while reading :)
It was good that it was everyones POV at first, because...everyone has kind of like a backstory that they are stamped with and it's good to know, when it's Himchan's POV from now on.
I'm excited :>

Mangoo #9 Sep 1, 2012 09:35:52

oh wait what...
This...is one amazing Fanfic, I'm serious, wow...I don't know how to write this...what I feel right now ÖÖ'''
Just the way it started, their first meeting, and then their daily live, how Himchan and Yongguk converse with each other...It doesn't feel like, I've missed the five years they spent together as friends. Normally I would feel like there is a time gap in between, that I've missed but it's not like that at all!..They are so natural, It doesn't feel out of place or so...I can't describe it well :/
And I totally like it, that it's in different POV's instead of one alone or from a third party that looks at all the guys impartial~ Bang's chapter was kind of cute : "I promise. As long as Himchan is breathing, I will be too" even though, that made me kind of sad as well, I don't know...like a premonition, that something sad about this fact will happen T-T'''
I like Jongup's chapter as well...I like his character in here. Kind of like he's disinterested and quiet to his surroundings but in reality he has so many things, that are in his mind...and I like the nice flow from Jongup's chapter to Zelo's, that was cut right through their first meeting, that was nice! And Zelo being such a tease towards Jongup hahah xD
But I don't know how I should feel about Youngjae's and Daehyun's story...to be honest, my ultimate OTP in B.A.P is DaeJae but (I kind of like BangHim in this story more :/)...hm...I don't know, maybe it's youngjae's brother that confuses me, that he paid him for kisses...or maybe it was just an excuse, to take him in? It's like they both kind of have a crush on each other, what stops them to make the next step?... but then there is Youngjae, that is fooling around like he doesn't care, but in reality he cares a lot and just the fact that he switches their pillows, because he can't fall asleep without him,...is so obvious, right? *sob* so cute TT
now to my fav chapter, the 7th. The reason why it's my favorite, is because of the scene...