Just in Time

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Tao struggles with life when he finally realises that not everything is okay. But in the midst of his breakdown someone appears, just in time.

 

 

 

Foreword

 

Tao didn't consider himself to be totally unlucky, or totally unfortunate. No, he was okay. He wasn't popular, or even very sociable, but he had a few friends. He had a roof, albeit less than adequate, over his head. He had a job, and he had an education - in fact, it was his last year of high school. His friends would often look at him with worried expressions and offer him items or money, but Tao would always decline. Teachers would quietly ask if he needed advice or extra help as they returned his test papers, a gentle hand touching his back with concern. Even at work, his boss would offer him extra hours whenever possible. To everyone else, Tao's life was something to be pitied; the kinder people would speak about how brave he was in hushed tones, while the meaner people, as in, most of the population of his school, would tease and mock him in loud whispers that were surely not meant to be heard by only the person next to them. For the longest while, Tao had got on okay. He didn't like the teasing, but he had friends to cheer him up. He studied as hard as he could, and he never felt too bad when he didn't do very well - there was always another issue to be thought of. He worked diligently, and was pleased that he was able to make his own money while his friends lazed around. But it seemed that Tao had been too optimistic for too long, or at least he hadn't realised what the others already had. For him, a day was busily spent worrying about too many things, and he was never able to simply sit and think about the future like the others. His vision of the future had been clouded by the present for year upon year. It was only when his final exams began to creep closer and the prospect of attending university was brought to his attention that Tao started to realise just why everyone looked at him as though he were a lost puppy. It wasn't a nice realisation, no; it sent Tao in a downward spiral as he understood what a mess of a life he had.






 






A/N: I'm writing this now, please look forward to it  ^__^!

lcat92
chapter 10 is in the process of being written! Sorry it's so so late, after posting 10 there won't be many delays anymore^^

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000521
#1
Chapter 3: I LOVE THIS
KpopMasterShipper
#2
Chapter 13: "I want you to know exactly how Tao feels. Uncertain."

*gasps*

The brilliance.. I'm lost, happy, sad, upset .., confused, ...and that's what you planned..like a random Kai hip trust (he evil) *claps* very well played....

This entire story was gold. I loved it so much and my feels are just everywhere..

Well, if they have that strong love, they'll get through it all (fighting!!
takowu
#3
Chapter 12: The End.
THE END.
*heavy breathing*
I couldn't sleep at night because I just kept thinking of this fic - I. Had to. Read it.
Captivating.
So it's now 7:30 am and there's life to attend to haha hahahahahaha ha ha .... ... :D
I have read chapter 13 as well and I think it's fine that you ended it this way, even though a lot of us may have hoped for a definite answer. Don't we all feel uncertain about our future? Even what with the feeling of allegedly having it under control...
ExoticPandragons
#4
Chapter 12: Omfg.... I just read all of this and just... Omg.... //i know you said that was it but i NeEd an epilogue of somethinnnnn//
DrawMe_Jd
#5
Chapter 13: I.. I really hoped for a happy ending of some sorts..

Also, after reading this I feel my life a lot less miserable than what it is.. OTL

I have no words left in my brain to comment this but I can only say that I loved it.. ㅠㅠ
wonkyuhyun
#6
Chapter 13: I feel empty@( ̄- ̄)@
mallowme
#7
Chapter 13: I don't know if i should be happy or sad. My emotions are going haywire right now. They're both broken but deeply inlove.

This story is a masterpiece author-nim (well for me it is) and i maybe a fan of fluffy unicorn puke worthy endings i love this ending more. Where you're totally left uncertain and unanswered.
Sydino
#8
Chapter 13: I hate the ending so much ;_; But I have to agree it's an excellent ending. Makes the readers feel so much emotion. Altho I still don't like feeling sad T_T
Y u do this to me author-nim!
The info about Chen and what Tao could had achieved with him made it worse. Taoris is two broken souls stuck together now, a fallen angel and a human with crushed dreams. I feel so uncertain, yes, and sad right now. Such awesome writing!!
shixunzi #9
Chapter 13: That was such a marvelous story and very unique for me. Well, this made me realize a lot of things regarding love and life. You're really amazing that I just want to cuddle you now though you made me cry over this.
drellenski
#10
Chapter 13: hellooooo... read this in one day. so well-written. at first the story went all lovey-dovey-fluffy. yes. kind of teenage girl drama... but the ending. ugh. it was so real that i want to cry for your amazingness. hard to decide whether i love the ending or not. but i prefer it that way. being all misterious and reaslistic! good job! :DDDD