The Beauty (is the) Beast

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Jiyong really despise the existence of the people who really care about him, who loved him, like him, Youngbae, Daesung and Seunghyun. Especially Seunghyun.

 

Seungri prayed someday Jiyong could feel how they feel so he can appriciate them more, value their existence more. 

 

 

“What happened to your face, Hyung??”

“Ji? What happened to you?”

“This is so ed up, Hyung,” Jiyong didn’t answered the older man’s question. “How are we suppose to make a comeback with me like this? Hard work for nothing! !”

 

 

 

 

Okaaaaay, that's it for a spoiler! ^^

Just a modern Beauty and The Beast story. I hope I didn't break any law for borrowing the plot. Well, not 100% the same, like I told you, it's a modern Beauty and The Beast.

 

Lame title (and main image, LoL), maybe will change it to a better one. Any ideas? >.<

Foreword

Hi everybodyyyyy!!!! I'm back with a new story. I won't be posting it until next week but hopefully I can do it faster. Your comments in We Could Be In Love was really making me beyond happy, I really thank you guys!

And I haven't been here for so long (always just from my phone) so I haven't leave proper comments in many story I've subscribed, I'll do it soon! ^^

 

Well, enough foreword, I hope you guys will enjoy this story when it comes out. It'll need a lot of love! :)

See you guys soon!!

 

kutunakal, out

 

 

p.s. daaaaaaamnnnnnn, monster mv is like.. woaaaaaaaah!!!! I love them!!! Love theeeem!!! GD!!!!!! And Alive Intro full version is so cool. Okay, I'll stop rambling! ^^

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kutunakal
There!! I fixed chapter 3 guys. Thanks for all the comments, and subbies, I really do love you guys!! kiss kiss kiss!!!
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Danees #1
Chapter 12: Thank you for making this happen (:
Mii-yoh #2
Chapter 12: Awsome~ I really really loved it ^^
fluffy but angsty, love it <3
verine #3
Chapter 12: Hi, so good to see an Indonesian author here since I am Indonesian too, LOL.

Usually I'm not into OOC fic but I give this fic a try since the fic was inspired by Beauty and the Beast so the character should resemble them more. I like the flow and the way u write the story, not too fast or too slow, just nice. We can take life lessons from here too.

Now, there were some 'not-make sense' things and inconsistency here, which still okay. But there was inconsistency that bothered me so much, which was Jiyong's feeling. I put some of them here :

Ch 2 (Jiyong's feeling about Kiko) : It’s not like he fell in love with her or something, but he really feel like he could be in no time.

Then in chp 4 (if I'm not wrong) : And now, Kiko, the girl he always loved, and he thought had always love him,.....

Then in next ch : Seunghyun, the man he loved for almost all his life....

It's confusing, it seems Jiyong has multiple personality or smtg. It seems u re-write the personality in each chapter and not just follow one big plan u've prepared. I found it in many fics (from other authors) too, they forget what they'have written before LOL.

Okay, this is it. Thanks for sharing and I hope I'm not make u down. I wish u bcm a better and better fics author (GTOP of course XD). Again, thanks <33
larrenlove #4
Chapter 12: aww how sweet I loved it
thya-aryssa #5
Chapter 12: eh? i havent put a comment yet?! read this a couple of times already...aishhh...

i love-love-love-love~looove this fic!!! i can feel the hurt n pain seunghyun feels, n cant help but feels irritated at jiyong at some point lol... i was rather hoping that u'd make a followup to this fic...hehe
HyemOlly #6
Chapter 1: Oh, i like it. It was interesting turn of events and i loved the lesson larned in the ending.
phiiee #7
Chapter 12: WAAAAAH FELLOW INDONESIAN WRITER! *happy*
Honestly all the disease thingy that happened to Ji made me cringe as I read it .___. But um.. Yeah...
I'm glad Ji turned nice in the end and they all live happily ever after! I'm deeply impressed by how determined Seunghyun is.
Thanks for sharing!
Btw, Alive Tour kemaren bkin gregetan bgt ga siiih *A*
HoldOnAngel #8
Chapter 12: OMG THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING! Wow, I think I fell in love <3
xtlover15 #9
Chapter 12: wow this is really a great fanfic so much.
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