Chapter 4: Touchy angsty? But it was really beautiful..(Uhm, though roo's opinion about crotch cracked me up, lol!) I feel like I should give my cat more love now so he would think of me the way roo did to jonghyun.. XD
Chapter 4: I am literally close to tears. Like, legit. I don't know what happened to Key and I'm sad about Roo, but I don't want to be sad because he was so happy T_T
My feels are just......... I can't even...........
So, so good. I'm gonna go buy that book now
So the first chapter I was laughing and by the end I'm sobbing. Obviously you wrote this well or my emotions wouldn't be in such a frenzy. Oh my god I can't stop crying. I just lost my dog a couple months ago so it really gets my emotions up. Great writing. I'm gonna go off and cry for awhile.
First I laugh because this "My name is Roo and this is my story" but now that I finished, I want to cry so bad, it's so sad, he gave his life for Kibum, right? It's so sweet
CONGRATULATE ME, I ACTUALLY MANAGED TO READ ALL THE CHAPTERS OF A FIC FROM YOU, FOR THE FIRST TIME EVAH~ (guilty.)
So... the story was awesome and I was planning on congratulating you for writing your first fic with a decent plot, but then remembered this was based off of a pre-existent book... so nvm XD
Your writing has definitely improved, in the sense that you tend to use a little less mood ruining words and that your grammar has improved...
Hopefully by the time you spend more time with your english tutor, your writing will become near to perfect..
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