Phone Calls

11:11

Hello again, readers! School was over, but it took me a few days to finish this chapter; terribly sorry!

I used a pretty different "writing style" for this chapter, but I hope you all enjoy!
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“Yong?”

“Hm?”

“Are you composing a new song?”

“Mhmm.”

“…”

“How’d you know?”

“You’re always really quiet when you compose.”

“… Sorry.”

“It’s okay.”

“…… Listen to this.”

“Okay.”

My bad love, I call you but there's no answer,
I beg to hold on to you but you coldly turn away,
My bad love, you are leaving like vapor,
I extend my hand to hold you but at some point, you already left me.

“… I’m not like that. That’s not about me, is it?”

“… It is.”

“What?! It is?!”

“I’m kidding.”

“Aish. You shouldn’t joke around with such things!”

“Hahaha, sorry Hyun. But what’d you think?”

“Mmm, I think it’s nice. The melody sounds good. Is that all you have so far?”

“… Secret.”

“What? Why~”

“You should be used to this now…”

“Well, I was hoping you would sing me the whole song this time.”

“I will. Someday, Hyun.”

“Okay. Promise?”

“Promise.”

“Yay! Oh, Yong, I have to go. Photo shoot.”

“… Don’t be pretty.”

“Yong! You’re so weird…”

“Seriously, Hyun. You can’t be pretty. Or else I’ll get jealous. I really don’t like sharing you with everyone else sometimes.”

“…”

“Okay, Hyun? Don’t be pretty.”

“… Well, I don’t like sharing you with everyone else sometimes too, so we’re even.”

“Hyu~n…”

“Yo~ng… Okay, I really have to go now. I’ll talk to you later.”

“Okay. I’ll try to finish the song soon, and then you can hear the finished product.”

“Sounds great! Bye Yo~ng.”

“Bye Hyu~n. I’ll call you tonight.”

“Okay; bye~”
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“Hyun!”

“Hi Yong!”

“How was your photo shoot? Are you tired?”

“Mmm, not really. It was a pretty easygoing shoot. But how about the song? I was thinking about it throughout the whole shoot!”

“I finished! In fact, I finished at exactly 11:11. Isn’t that cool?”

“Hahaha, that’s a cool time to finish. Can I hear it now?”

“Well, it’s still a bit rough though, since I haven’t really had anybody else hear it yet…”

“Then I’ll be the first one to give you some feedback. C’mon, Yong, let me hear it.”

“Well… alright.”

I can't fall asleep in this long night,
I draw you out again.
Today, I hold back tears yet again,
I let out a sigh -- you're my love.

Love you, love you, love you, my love,
I want your love

My painful love, I'm hurting as if I cut my skin,
I try to hold it in but soundlessly, it hurts.
My aching love, it's bitter as if I swallowed poison,
I try to smile but I'm faintly aching.

Today, I see the morning yet again,
I draw you out again.
Lingering attachments push over to me again,
I still love you -- you're my love,
You’re my love.

Love you, love you, love you, my love,
I want your love.

My painful love, I'm hurting as if I cut my skin,
I try to hold it in but soundlessly, it hurts.
My aching love, it's bitter as if I swallowed poison,
I try to smile but I'm faintly aching.

My bad love, I call you but there's no answer,
I beg to hold on to you but you coldly turn away.
My bad love, you are leaving like vapor,
I extend my hand to hold you but at some point, you already left me.

“…Wow, it sounds great! It must be the magic of finishing the song at 11:11, hahaha…”

“Haha, I guess so.”
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Perhaps the ending isn't very fulfilling, but I couldn't really think of any other way to finish it up. I basically just ended on the "11:11" note again, huh?

The song that I used was CNBLUE's "Still in Love". Since it was composed by Yonghwa anyway, I thought it would be most fitting for this story. The lyrics used are the English translation, and I took out the "stabirabi rabststabira" parts and other little parts because it's likely that those were added later in the composing/writing lyrics process.

Comments are always welcome! Thank you for reading~

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luxubu #1
great ending!!! They finally got a lovely daughter together.
Thank you. hope to read more from you
meluvyuya
#2
i think it'll be good if you put some naration. hehe just opinion~
fighting! ^_______^
rahmi32 #3
fighting !!!!
six-thirty
#4
hehe. So cute and yes very cheesy. I enjoyed reading this none the less.
infinitytimesfive #5
This was so cute! I liked your word choice, and I thought your characterization was pretty good.
I kind of wish it were a bit longer, though. Why so short? I want to read more. ;__;
yeyekermit #6
Can't imagine hyun will say this cheesy line in real life
rahmi32 #7
hello you right it's too short and coz i'm a yongseo shipper i'm not rally satisfied for yongseo moment. maybe you can add more of yongseo/another pairing moment. but so far i enjoyed your fanfic and i like cheesy hyunie~.
i'm sorry if i too much critizied your fanfic.
fighting for another fanfic !!!
i will waited (especially yongseo fanfic, coz i only read fanfic about them) ^^