11:11 pm

11:11

Seohyun sat cross-legged on the edge of Yonghwa's bed, reading a novel. Meanwhile, Yonghwa stared intently at his computer screen, his guitar resting lightly on his lap. His fingers drummed softly on the table top as he racked his brain for the next chord.

Quickly glancing at the small numbers on the bottom right corner of the computer monitor, he emitted a soft "Oh."

"Hm?"

"It's 11:10 right now."

"Hm."

He spun his black swivel chair around (with a loud squeak) to face her. "Huh? That's all? I thought girls were obsessed with 11:11 and how it grants wishes and stuff."

She scoffed, then looked up over her book with a small smile. "Why would I need to do that 11:11 thing if everything I could ever wish for is right in front of me?"
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Hahaha, it's kinda cheesy, huh? Well, I suddenly thought of that last line when this girl at school was like, "Oh no! I missed 11:11 by a minute!" So yeah.

Please comment, as, like previously mentioned, this is my first oneshot, (it's so short... ><) and I really want to improve. I'm not sure if I kept both Yonghwa and Seohyun (somewhat) "in character"; I sure hope I kind of did though, hahaha.

But thanks so much for reading~ :)

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luxubu #1
great ending!!! They finally got a lovely daughter together.
Thank you. hope to read more from you
meluvyuya
#2
i think it'll be good if you put some naration. hehe just opinion~
fighting! ^_______^
rahmi32 #3
fighting !!!!
six-thirty
#4
hehe. So cute and yes very cheesy. I enjoyed reading this none the less.
infinitytimesfive #5
This was so cute! I liked your word choice, and I thought your characterization was pretty good.
I kind of wish it were a bit longer, though. Why so short? I want to read more. ;__;
yeyekermit #6
Can't imagine hyun will say this cheesy line in real life
rahmi32 #7
hello you right it's too short and coz i'm a yongseo shipper i'm not rally satisfied for yongseo moment. maybe you can add more of yongseo/another pairing moment. but so far i enjoyed your fanfic and i like cheesy hyunie~.
i'm sorry if i too much critizied your fanfic.
fighting for another fanfic !!!
i will waited (especially yongseo fanfic, coz i only read fanfic about them) ^^