The love story of GuiLun

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This is NOT my story. 

It is originally a chinese story but i feel that it's quite a good story so i decided to translate it for those who can't read chinese.

This is the original story.

http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/guilunss/chapter_1.shtml

it's quite a short story, hope you guys enjoy it. :D

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sweetghost #1
the story was awesome ..i love it,,,:)
VictoriaCookie #2
This way too cute!
lovely_vampire
#3
OMG sis. I really LOVE U, you know that, haha. Thanks "again" for sharing this story with us, and for all your<br />
efforts in translating this. I'm happy you love Guilun, hehe. YUP, Guilun is love. LOL, Aaron only has two<br />
hearts left to give it to Guigui, but I also find it sweet, that only her, Guigui, have TWO hearts given by him,<br />
Aaron...YAY....really cute. And the teacher is the best. I wish mine was like that too, lol. Anyway<br />
I rolled my eyes at the teacher's comment, haha. But who knows, maybe there's someone who actually<br />
has a crush on him, right...^__^ Million thanks. Hugs and Kisses and Happy 2011
grace_leeu #4
HI! I found you on here too! I saw your Chinese version on Winglin. I love Guilun, thanks for translating this into English too. I can read Chinese, but I feel like this is a different story now that it's in English even though everything is the same. haha Love Guilun! They're really cute!<br />
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-atelophobia
#5
awww so cute, re-reading this makes me all happy again! I cant believe Aaron ran and look for her, and gave her his heart, that is just too adorable..got to love GuiLun, I was -pretty sad that it has to end like that! ):<br />
Support GuiLun always and ForeveR<33<br />
GuiLun #1 die-hard fan!♥
Bubble
#6
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />
So sweet^^ and super cute^^ <br />
HAHA .... he ran and looked for gui gui until he left only 2 hearts with him :P <br />
So funny^^ lol <br />
I hope you will have more guilun for me hehe :P<br />
Hai! Arigato Gozaimasta!
Littlemagnaemary
#7
aiggooo!! sooo cuteee >.<<br />
please update soon!
lady_mocca #8
OMG, how cute.<br />
Thanks for traslate this^^
ficlhuber #9
please update soon .. xD
hebefanatic
#10
oh my i just realised! sorry sorry!! thanks for telling me! :D changed it already :D