Chapter 18: I’m reading this, and the fact that Kim Jonghyun actually passed away hurts so much.

I know English might not be your first language, but if you could get a proofreader or an editor it would make reading much easier. Otherwise the story has loads of potential.

Chapter 2: So many grammer mistakes but still like the story line and my kyungsoo.Auyhornim!!! Here is your new fan for your fanfic

Chapter 48: Ingat po author-nim :)) filipino din po ako pero sa luzon po ako

Chapter 48: OoO
hwaiting author-nim!
I don't think i will be able to survive without electricity...
Lol now that i think about it i might of died on the first day TTOTT
Anyways HWAITING~

Chapter 47: The ending was really hilariously cute

Chapter 15: He really makes me really mad kyung soo does poor aerin

Chapter 47: Daebak.. Love this story!! <3 <3 <3

Chapter 45: New reader here. Love ur story.

Chapter 43: whoa just found out this story kkk. This is good but you have to put " before and after direct speech. Its confusing kkk