woo hoo!!! ur first official srory eh??? :) i will support u n give u my opinions about it.
1) Great start but if u dont mind, make the chapter 1 longer ya..
2) The second chapter is much better than the first and i think it is easier to write than type so...i suggest you write if u cant finish this on the interner. notebooks are portable but the internet,well u dont have any devices that are able to acess to it so....GO ON N WRITE/TYPE!!!
U GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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