{ONESHOT PREQUEL}: The Train

Description

 

Here you are an invisible nerd with seemingly no friends at all, walking with the most popular guy in school, your best friend. With all the girls swooning over him, it wasn’t a surprise that you (May I repeat, a nerd) happened to fall for that sweet and smart jock either.
Oh god, social hierarchies .

 

 

You didn’t know why you wanted to hide the fact that you like your best friend.
Was it because, you both lived on different levels of the social hierarchy in school?
Was it because he was a demigod and you were… a mere human?
A royal to a commoner?

 

 

“나는너를좋아해{naneun noreul joahaeyo (informal)}.” You said hesitantly.
As the train kept coming past, you glanced at Luhan whose vision was still stuck straight ahead.
He didn’t hear it…
It was surprise since he usually had a very distinct and perfect hearing.

 

 

“What did you say?” the rattling tracks soon disappeared to the right.

“Nothing.” 

 

 

Foreword

SEQUEL FOR THIS IS THIS!For the constant askers... and the comments. Yeesh!

Alright, I had a vote on Tumblr who should I write about in this fic, THIS time. It was all tied with Suho, Sehun, Luhan, Baekhyun, Chanyeol, Lay, Kris, and etc. I'm surprised there was no Kai. LOL. Anyway, here's the fic (Luhan won if you hadn't noticed), I promised you guys. Thank you to those who have answered me. I am very glad I'm not being ignored. ♥

This fic is also based on Luhan's hearing. He's a heavy sleeper, and well... I'm in no position to say he has terrible hearing but I've heard that:

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... So yeah. Don't kill me over or anything. (GULL,)I can't even explain what (I FEEL) I'm trying to say. Lol, did you get the parentheses? If you don't, listen to EXO-M's version of What is Love

COMMENT and SUBSCRIBE!

Lol. My mom thought I was talking to someone when in reality, I'm a lonely otaku who talks to herself and loves k-pop. I have no life and friends. ;v;

All rights reserved and storyline belongs to -quixotic. Any sort of plagarism is not allowed. 

© Copyright to -quixotic.

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razberri_100802 #1
Chapter 1: YAH IEKEMDKDMDODK
kangjein
#2
Chapter 1: Wkkwkk...I like this! I can imagine perfectly the girls face when Luhan say “I have perfect hearing.”
Prom15ed
#3
Chapter 1: OHHHMYGOD THIS WAS SO CUTE. C;. I love it. The train part was really adorable, and the way you ended it was amazing. <3.

By the way- you used google translate, didn't you? >__< . sorry, but the actual grammar/spelling for "I like you" (informal) is
나 너 좋 아 해. (Na neo joh-a-hae). You might want to change that. source: my korean class.
SHINeeLeeCia
#4
Chapter 1: WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH /dead/ ♥♥
me143utaeminie
#5
Chapter 1: dkvmbksmkzlxkdmcksxnfvskngxcfgkmfvkcxmarfkgscxlrgfcfkv ks fvcwfkxms...........................

i . really . can't . control . my . feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels! wae author-nim .. WHY YOU LIKE THAT!!! T^T .. waaaaaaaah~ .. LUHAN!!! OH MY GAAAAAAAAAAAAHD!!! ... i feel like cheating over my beloved kai!! XDD .. saldkenfajgf...


P.S: Your so daebak!!! ... hwaiting!!!!!!!!!! with your up coming stories!! ^^~
honey-
#6
After seeing that you've decided to write a sequel, I wanted to give something back to you as well ;')

I love the simple story line of this one shot. The way you've taken an everyday-life situation and turned it into something so cute and ajsQ9AJDMN;pk and heartwarming and beautiful and ugh. The pacing is perfect! It flows smoothly - like in a realistic sense that makes the scene feel more believable. The part when the train was passing by and she was confessing - that felt really genuine to me, I don't know. It's something I would do though omg.

And the part when they were both singing together. Way to go, -quixotic. You've successfully ripped out my heartstrings (in a good way) and I've become this ugly, inconsolable mess of feelings. The ending though, did the job omg.

This is such a wonderful one shot, I swear! It was really enjoyable to read; I love your writing style. I think one thing I really find commendable about your writing is how you manage to write romance in such a subtle way. I find it more beautiful that way.

I am sooo looking forward to the sequel! Ahh.

Have some love; ♥ * ♥ * ♥ ~
yeol1127
#7
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!! SEQUEL PLEASSSSSSSEEEE!!!!
MushrooMakane18
#8
Eh? Is it gonna end like this? T~T
chin-sun
#9
Sequel please ! ^^