Jealousy in the air~?

Fell for an ELF

 

Maddie’s POV

*Beep! Beep!

I carried my luggage and bid my family goodbye before going out

“Annyeong! Are you ready?” Teukie oppa greeted

“Yep! I’m ready~” I answered with glee

“Let me carry this for you~” Donghae oppa suddenly popped

“Ohhh! Thank you, oppa!” I thanked him

Yah!!! Why is he so caring? He’s such a gentleman!!! Oppa~KYAAA!!! *Yah!!! Stop fangirling!!!! You need to get used in being with them~ COMPOSE YOURSELF!!!*

I sighed

“Maddie-ah?! What are you doing?” Teukie oppa asked

“Huh? Oh! Mianhae, oppa~” I apologized as I realized that I was the only one outside the car

“Probably daydreaming again~” someone suddenly said

Who said that?! I’m totally gonna kill----- OMO!!! Kyu oppa? What’s his problem now?!

“So what if I’m daydreaming? It’s not about you, anyway~” I replied as I sat beside Belle

“Ohh really? I surely doubt that~” Kyu oppa confidently answered with a smirk

“You’re so confident, oppa! How if I say I was dreaming about how gentleman was Donghae oppa??? And it’s not ‘daydreaming’! It’s already 10 at night, you know~” I answered which made everyone gasp

“B-B-BWO???? Donghae hyung?” Kyu oppa asked, probably shocked

HAH!!! Shocked?! Well, you should be~ But seriously, it was really Donghae oppa~ I just don’t know why I feel different when he offered to take my luggage. I know it’s normal for guys to do those things, but it was just very thoughtful~ Teukie oppa was in front of me, and I was like expecting him to be the one to do that, but Hae oppa suddenly took the initiative to do that. It’s just… just…. AISH!!!! I’m overreacting~

“That’s what you get for always being confident and being mean to Maddie!!! Serves you right, hyung!”  Henry oppa exclaimed and we ‘high fived’

“AISH!!!” Kyuhyun oppa groaned and faced the window

Was I too hard on him??? Was I so mean??? AISH!!! My conscience and guilt is killing me!!! What should I do??? But, it was his fault right??? Or maybe my fault??? AISH!!!!!!! I hate it~ I hope he’s not mad at me! Kyu oppa, mianhae…

“Kumowo~” someone whispered

HUH??? What did I do??? Who is th---- O______O

“For what, oppa?” I asked, trying to act fine

“For appreciating my being ‘gentleman’ to you~ I really appreciate it! Salamat! (Thank You!)” Hae oppa thanked

“Ahhh~ That’s nothing, oppa! You were really a gentleman to me since we first met! Thank you also for treating me well~” I answered with a smile

“That’s nothing~ We guys should really treat you, girls, well! That’s a fact~” Hae oppa said and went back to his seat

-end of Maddie’s POV-

 

Little did they know, someone was secretly watching and listening to them~ That person was……….. HURT~

 

Kyuhyun’s POV

OMO!!! What have I done?! I’m such a bad person~ I really hate myself for not acting normal towards her!!! I mean whenever I see her, I don’t know how to talk to her without being mean to her although I don’t want to be mean to her!!! AISH!!!!!! I can’t show her my real personality~ Lord, help me!!! Please……

“Kumowo~” someone said

It was Donghae hyung~ I don’t know but I felt a twitch in my heart when I saw them talking~ Am I sick? Do I have a sickness in the heart??? It really hurts~ *No, you don’t have a problem in your heart! But you have love problems~* WTH?! I’m really going crazy now~ I’m hearing things!!! Weird things~ I really hate it!!! *I’m not weird! I’m even helping you~ You’re asking, I’m just answering you!!! Be grateful rather than being hateful~* Shall I sleep, first??? To stop these weird things??? Maybe, yes… *BABO!!! You’re asking but you’re also the one answering!!! BABO~ Awake or Asleep, I won’t go away because I’m a part of you~ I’m your subconscious mind~*

“YAH!!!! I’m not STUPID!!!!!” I exclaimed which made everyone look at me

“BWO???? What are you saying, Kyuhyun-ah???” Teukie hyung worriedly asked

“Uh…. I was…. I was…..” I stuttered while trying to think of an excuse

They’d probably think that I’m crazy if I told them about my subconscious mind!!! *Ani!!! They also have their own subconscious minds, you know~ they’d probably can relate with you!* YAH!!! Stop bothering me~ I’m trying to think of an excuse!!!

“Maybe he had a bad dream~ Am I right, oppa?” Maddie asked me, concerned

SHE’S CONCERNED!!! SHE’S STILL CONCERNED!!!! YAY!!! *Ofcourse she is!!! She’s not narrow-minded to lose her concern for you, just because of your stupid deeds earlier~* YAH!!! Stop talking to me, will you??? *No and No!!!* AIIIIIISSSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!

“Ahhh…. Yeah! It was really bad…” I agreed as I smile at her

“Well, better join us! It would help you not to have bad dreams again~” Maddie suggested

“What are you doing, anyway?” I asked

“We’re praying the rosary~” Siwon hyung answered as he lifts his rosary

“Ohhhh….. Sure!!! I’ll join you~” I answered as I made the ‘sign of the cross’

-end of Kyuhyun’s POV-

 

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This is also a repost~ But the next chapter is a new one~ hehehe :D PLEASE COMMENT MORE~ hehehe

 

COMMENT REPLIES:

elf_verl : ur story is so cute~~


haha!

i like the hc-belle moment :+ 

come read my story when u're free too k?? =)))

sujuaddict: hehe thank you~ :D really? I'm glad you like it!!! :D Sure!!! I'll check it if I have time~

 

ohmysyupeogirl : waaah~ THE WHO?..i think si kyu ung nagtakip sa mata ni madie tapos si ming naman kay belle..hahaha.hula lang xD btw.laptrep ako sa pagiging evil ni kibum kay chula xD.haha

sujuaddict: hahaha nasagot na siguro ng chapter 9 yung tanong mo? loljk haha thanks for sharing your guess! :D hahaha si kibum pala eh may tinatagong pagkaloko loko eh noh?! loljk

 

nirtak28 : daebak... so fun to read....i'm from the Philippines yet i never been to intramuros...thanks for doing this.. i felt like i was having a tour as well!!!!!!! update please ^_^

sujuaddict: hehehe thank you~ really?! you should try to go there!!! it's really pretty there!!! sure, that's nothing~ Btw, thank you for waiting for my update and not unsubscribing!!! :D

 

SUJU_ELF143Who?!!

I think that is Heechul and Donghae!!! ^^

sujuaddict: hahahah OMO!!! I thought no one would guess it!!!!!! kekeke you're good~ :D keep it up! ^__^

 

Karasette_Man, I like the new couple alot! It's so adorable! But Maddie is awesome as always! I'm putting my guess on Sungmin, though have a feeling I might be wrong but whatever...and for Maddie, I'm guessing probably Kyuhyun! Fighting! I'm loving the story so far!

sujuaddict: hahaha thanks for liking them~ :D IKR!!! hahaha it's ok, at least you tried!!! :D FIGHTING!!! thank you, I appreciate it~

 

melissa13 The last chapter is so good.Kibum and Heechul are so funny when teasing each other.kekeke~Nice one unnie,Keep it up;)

sujuaddict: thank you, dongsaeng!!! hahahah IKR!!!  thanks again~ :D

 

parkmyungdae : hay... kabitin naman ung chapter 8 =.=

hehe, anyways.. AWESOME STORY!!!
update again!!! can't wait ^^

sujuaddict: hahaha sorry kung nabitin kita~ :D haha thank you so much!!! thanks for patiently waiting for my update~ :D

 

myunghee_0780 new reader heree

i so love your story i cant stop laughing when im reading this
lucky Belle and Maddie i hope na i one of them especially Belle my first and second bias Hee and Sungmin oppa hohoho baliktad nga lang kami ni Belle first ko si Hee oppa eh hohoho
anyway, by the way, milky way, highway anong sabeeee Filipino din aketch halata naman di ba XD

sujuaddict: Annyeong!!! hahaha thank you!!! I'm glad you like it and the fact the you're laughing while reading it 'coz I thought it was boring~ they're really lucky! hahaha me too!!! Really? what a coinscidence!!! :D hahahaha hindi ka naman mahilig sa 'way'? kekeke Ikinalulugod kong makilala ka!!! :D ano daw?! *nosebleed* :D

 

cHoKyUhYuN03 : WAHAHAHA!!! naeenjoy ko talaga ung story mo.. feeling ko aq si maddie... hahaha!! love your story update more!!! fighting!!!

sujuaddict: hahahaha thank you~ kala ko walang nag-eenjoy eh!!! oks lang na ifeel mo, kasi kayo (readers) talaga si maddie!!! Nilagyan ko lang ng pangalan para di gaanong hassle pag naglalagay ng underscore!!! lol tamad ko ba? hehehe sorry~ FIGHTING!!! btw, thanks for waiting for my update!!! ;D

 

KyuChul021Astig to, haha. SJ sa Philippines. Tapos nag eenglish yung mga driver! xD Nakakakilig pag nag aasaran sila. Haha, nakakatuwa yung mga love triangle! Nice story. Update soon. Nagcomment ako kasi sabi mo xD :))

sujuaddict: hahaha kaya nga eh~ Totoo naman na nag-eenglish sila eh! kaya nga tayo ung 3rd country na gumagamit ng English language! hehehe di ba?? :D thanks sa compliment!!! thanks sa paghihintay ng update ko!!! :D ano ba yan?! ok na sana eh!!! sinama mo pa yung last phrase!!! loljk btw, thanks sa pagsunod sa sinabi ko! Sana magcomment ka pa sa mag susunod kong updates!!! :D

 

saranghaeKYU09 : wow. natutuwa talaga ko sa storya mo, sa intramuros pa !! e nandun school ko ee !! haha , kung totoo to, nag-spazz na ko ng todo, haha :D i wish i was maddie, first nd second ko dn cna KYU at HAE eeh !! ang sarap lang kung makakarelate ako :D update soon hah !! love this <3

sujuaddict: hahaha thank you~ O? buti ka pa, malapit lang!!! ako medj. malayo~ hahaha parehas tayo nila maddie ng bias!!! kekeke tama!!! thanks sa paghihintay sa update ko~ thank you ulit!!! :D

 

Chaeee1015Hahaha...Yow! Love your story! Filipinoes are rocking AsianFanFics! hahahaha..Wish ko na lng na sna ako talaga si Maddie! Si Kyuhyun bias ko ehh..XD

sujuaddict: Yow!!! hehehe thank you for loving it!!! hahaha they really are~ hahaah same tayo!!! :D

 

yonggukbiaseed update soooon ~ i love your story ♥

sujuaddict: thank you for patiently waiting for my update!!! thanks for loving it,btw!!! :D

 

SujuElfishLoveYah Chingu! Please update soon ~ and thank u for putting Filipino- English translations :) I need to learn my Tagalog again :P hehehe.....

sujuaddict: yes? loljk sorry for keep you waiting but thanks for waiting patiently!!!! I appreciate it!!! :D hehehe sure, no problem!!! hahaha I'm glad if I can help you~ HWAITING!!! :D

 

kyusarang0203update please T___T

sujuaddict: sorry to keep you waiting!!! I'm really sorry!!! But thanks for not unsubscribing and patiently waiting!!! :D

 

sujusyndromeHOY MAG-UPDATE KA NA. ABAAAAAAA.

sujuaddict: hahahaha eto na nga!!! kekeke :D

 

 

Btw, I don't own the pictures, so credits to the rightful owners!!! :D

 

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GirlDreams
#1
Update naman ^^
Saumya #2
Chapter 16: Loving the story so far! Please update soon! Much love!! ^_^ <3
Super1308
#3
Chapter 16: Unni ginawa mo ba on purpose na si maddie ay makakagrupo i yesung ???
SkiKyu
#4
Chapter 16: Whoaa!! Where's Maddie?! >< Update soon!! ^.^
octa82_ichigo #5
Chapter 16: wahhhh the story is awsome :D update soon pleaseee ^^
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #6
Chapter 16: OMO!!! Who is he, Maddie??!! Is it Kyuhyun??... TELL ME!! NOW!!!... xD xD please... nvm.. maybe Leeteuk Oppa will tell me.. Oppa, who is it??.. kekeke :)) :))

What?!!! Where did you go Maddie!!.. Uhh.. please be okay... please be safe... and SUPER JUNIOR OPPA SAVE HER!! HURRY!! :((( *worried*

update soon.. Soon.. :)
sujusyndrome #7
Chapter 16: grabe gusto ko na talaga makapunta ng Vigan :((((

Update pa ng isang chapter!! alam mo yung bitin?
Tiarakeeper #8
Chapter 15: Hi new reader here:) love ur story and hope that u would update soon:)
melovesbias
#9
Chapter 15: LEETEUK.
KYUHYUN.
DONGHAE.
YESUNG.
AMBENTA XDDDD
Updateeeeeeeee :3
HaeSun #10
Chapter 15: Awwww!!! I think Teukie Oppa likes her? Not just as a Dongsaeng!!! Hahahah!

Update Author-ssi!! Salamat? Is that right?? Hehe.