Star Savior

Star Savior

On a blue night 
With a blue sight.
On a cold bench 
Sat this ugly wench. 

Abandoned for her sin, 
she can only sit in. 
Tears slid down her face.
And fears replete this place. 

Amidst all this pain,
Of heat, there was but a grain. 
One hand with the warmth of a flame,
And two eyes without any blame.

A voice overflowing with passion,
Penetrates her and takes action. 
She rises like a flower,
Enriched with power. 

And as for that savior star, 
She knows he'll never be far.
For he sleeps in the corner of her chest,
Guarding her heart even as she rests. 

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suju26kamz
#1
Chapter 1: this is beautiful ❤️
kkpop_4ever
#2
The storyline seems interesting
1234kpopland #3
nice story
pandawriter #4
This was beautiful. I love poetry...
Nice writing!
Denisaaaaaa
#5
Wow- i loved this piece.<br />
It was really meaningful- to me at least.<br />
<3
OnAFallingStar #6
it was really beautiful....i like it :D
ayeshalee
#7
This is really beautiful <3
chansikai
#8
I <3 this~! Oh, and if you don't mind me asking...<br />
did you make ur own poster?<br />
if you did, do you mind me asking WHAT did you use to make it?<br />
madz67
#9
So meaningful!<br />
<br />
<3333
daydreams_
#10
Love your poem. It's so sweet and meaningful. :)