Simplicity

Description

Key feels a little lost, thinking about the things that used to make him happy and all he's done. Jonghyun proves to him that the present can make him happy too.

Foreword

Yeah, very short little ficlet on a balcony. Enjoy:D

Fleshed this out a bit more over here.

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fraisedouce #1
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Ilonahaku #2
I love it, really beautifully written. ♥

I really like that your story gives me melancholic feeling and as Key said, sometimes I think about the past - how things used to be... Yes, sometimes it is sad and sometimes I miss it, too.
I really adore the nostalgic and bittersweet atmosphere of your fanfic.:)

I laughed when Jjong said that he could cry because of Key´s words. XD

I really love the interaction betweem them - how he rested his head on Jjong´s shoulder, how Jjong hugged him and tried to comfort him. And Jjong´s words were wise and really great.
Especially this line caught my attention - “Things are fine the way they are. Right now, I don’t need anything else.” ♥

"The simplicity of the world around him - Jonghyun's warmth around him, with night air tickling his nose- made him feel like this was all he really needed to be happy." - very beautiful ending!!! ♥♥♥ He was right. :)

I was impressed by your story. ;) Really great job! ^^
boredfangirl #3
Really cute <3
Short but really sweet. I would love to read longer jonkey fluffs from you :) I like your style! ^^ x
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