Couple day

Blind

~Next Day~ Saturday~

                                                    ~Japan~

Jiyong: manager did you help me deliver the present for Sunmi back in Korea?

Manager: yes I did, and you promise to concentrate if i did that

Jiyong: yeah I got it... no phone calls

                                                     ~Little Village~

Hongki: WHAT!

Seunghyun: sorry Jaejin, Jonghun,Minhwan and I have to go to the city today

Jaejin: we didn't know until this morning, our parent's are planning to take us to this place

Hongki: fine, at least Sohe is here right?

Sohee: uh.. i'm sorry, but I have to help my dad take care of his paper work...

Hongki: but today is Sunny's birthday

Sohee:well your not busy right... so you can celebrate it with her right?

Hongki: I guess

                                                        ~Sunmi house~

Sunmi: (*sigh*)

ding dong ding dong

Sunmi: Hongki? What are you doing here this early?

Hongki: oh nothing, want to hang out today

Sunmi: hm... sure..., here come in I need to get ready first

Hongki: ok

Sunmi runs up to get ready, Hongki sitting at the family room

Hongki: huh? who is this guy in this picture with Sunny..? He looks kind of familiar... as if I saw him somewhere before...Jiyong!!

Sunmi: Hongki i'm finish... oh ...

Hongki: is that Jiyong?

Sunmi: uh yeah...

Hongki: i'm like his boy fan! I love how he can compose such great music.... hey... are you a fan of him too?

Sunmi: well... yeah sure

Hongki: wow... you must be really lucky to take a picture with him, and so close together too, it looks like you guys are a couple, but that can't be possible right?

Sunmi: of course! uh.... well lets go now

Walking to the Cafe

Hongki: um Sunny where's your parent's shoudn't they be here with you?

Sunmi: (*depress look*) My parent's... they died... in a car crash...

Hongki: (*shock*) i'm really sorry!!!!!!!

Sunmi: it's ok... i'm fine... hey look there's the cafe

Waitor: hello aww.... look at you two... must be new couples!

Sunmi: uh well we are just

Waitor cuts Sunmi off

Waitor: fresh new couples right? yes right? ok! Well this way (*laugh*)

Hongki: uh thank you...

Waitor: so why don't you guys try our couple coffee ok! oh did you guys know that today is the village couple festival (*laugh*)

Waitor leaves and makes their drink

Waitor: here you go enjoy!

Hongki: (*laugh*) couples (*laugh*)

Sunmi: (*sigh*) he is like in his own little world right there

Hongki: hey... let's pretend to be a couple today just for fun

Sunmi: (*laugh*) sure, I want to experience this festival (*laugh*)

20 minutes later

Sunmi: Waitor! Bill please

Waitor: eh... take a couple picture first!

Hongki: uh ok

Waitor: ok uh Hongki and Sunny right?

Hongki: uh yeah

Waitor: ok Hongki and Sunny face each other ok and stare into each other eyes

Hongki hearts starts to beat realy fast, and the WAitor takes three picture of them

Sunmi: uh are we finish ?

Waitor: oh sorry yeah, sigh.. this is such a cute picture....

Leaving the Cafe

Hongki: whoa... look at all those couples wearing couple shirts

Sunmi: hey look! there is this little T-shirt store over there, maybe that's where their all getting it at, let's get one too (*laugh*)

Hongki: sure

At the store

Sunmi: um hey...

Owner: omo! look at you two! you guys are so cute together!

Hongki: (*laugh*) thanks, today is our first date

Owner: really! Here you guys can wear this couple T-shirt

Sunmi reads her shirt: I love my cookie (arrow pointing left)

Hongki reads his shirt: I love my cupcake (arrow pointing right)

Sunmi: aww that's so cute.. I guss i should stand on your right from now on (*laugh*), thank you so much!

Owner: no problem .... have fun!

Sunmi and Hongki went to the change rom and change into their new shirts

Wondering around the streets

Sunmi: (*sigh*) it seems like we are we couple now doesn't it... I feel kinda bad though...

Hongki: why?

Sunmi: like... should i tell you or not um...

Hongki:tell me...

Sunmi: well Sohee likes you....

Hongki: I have a feeling she does...but ... I.... don't have any feeling for her...maybe because i'm not ready yet

Sunmi: well I hope you and Sohee will be together..

Hongki: well we're not a real couple, we're just having fun right

Sunmi: yeah I guess, hey look amusement park lets go

Sunmi and Hongki plays in the amusement park or 5 hours

Sunmi: whoa it's 10 already!

Hongki:yeah... um...I want to take you somewhere

Sunmi: uh ok (*laugh*)

Little girl: escuse me.... mister... do you want to buy a rose for your girlfriend?

Hongki: sure!

Little girl: here, oh at 11:50 meet at the townhall with your girlfriend and the rose, there will be a big surprise!

Sunmi: (*laugh*) ok little girl , aww you're so cute

Hongki: ah we don't have that much time let's go Sunny

Sunmi: oh ok!

At a pond

Sunmi: whoa it's so dark here.....

Hongki: here close your eye now...

Sunmi: um ok...

Hongki: ok you can open your eyes now

Sunmi: omg..... (*tears coming out*)

Sunmi sees the pond full of little lantern boats, the trees with beautiful lights hanging onto it that says" HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUNNY"

Sunmi:omg.... how did you know...

Hongki: Sohee told me, but the other guys are busy so they couldn't come.... i'm sorry I don't have enough time to buy a cake, but here a present for you

Sunmi: omg what is it

Hongki: open it....

Sunmi: omg.... did you carve this out yourself?

Hongki: yeah.... I didn't have enough money for your present....

Sunmi: omg I love this carve Mickey Mouse!

Sunmi gives Hongki a big hug

                                                       ~Japan~

On the phone

Manager: aish what did you say you lost the present!

Assistance: i'm sorry, but it disappear when I went to get it in the office

MAnager: aish!

Jiyong: manager why is your face so pale..

manager: he lost your present!

Jiyong: WHAT! how could you!!!!

ManageR: eh eh to make it up you can call her now ok

Jiyong: cheh

~ Village~

ring ring

Sunmi: (*wipping her tears away*) hello?

Jiyong: Sunmi! i'm sorry  I didn't call you ealier

Sunmi: oh... it's ok.. I understand that you are busy

Jiyong: I don't have much time "HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUNNY!"

Sunmi: thank you, go back to work now....

Jiyong: ok hunny... i'm sorry.... bye....

Hongki: who was it?

Sunmi: my friend back in the city

Hongki: oh I see

EVERYONE PLEASE ATTEND TO THE TOWN CENTER! OUR SPECIAL COUPLE DAY ENDING CEREMONY IS STARTING

Sunmi: omg it's starting let's go

Hongki: ok

Sunmi: ow...

Hongki: omg... are you ok?

Sunmi: I think I twisted my ankle

Hongki: here i'll carry you ther

Sunmi: really....

As Hongki carries her to the destination...Sunmi had a weird feeling

~At the town hall~

Sunmi: hey look isn't that Sohee dad and Sohee?

Hongki: hey you're right.. she's  prob busy because of today festival I guess

Woomin: Ladies and Gentlemen let's welcome my daughter SOHEE

Audience: WHOOHOOOO

Sunmi: yeah go SOHEE!

Sohee: ok... everyone who got a rose for their girlfriend , if the guy is holding the rose can you please hand it to your girlfriend....

people doing what Sohee told them to do

Sohee: Now the girl will close their eyes, and the guy please untie the ribbon attach to the rose, now after you finish doing that check the ribbon .... If the ribbon has the word LOVE then raise your hand up, and two guys will cover you guys up and bring you guys up on stage.. READY GO!

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
As I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this and now looking forward to reading this
Iminthezone #2
Congrats
jeonghae #3
congrats!!
yanhui_tan
#4
Congratulations for being featured as the story of the day =)
anditarasoekowijoto
#5
Yooongdeer!!!
il0stmymind
#6
omo yoona!
SunMiJjangWordpress
#7
I love how Hong Ki ended up with Sun Mi~
mudkip118 #8
Hmm... Interesting storyline?
danslapoubelle
#9
At first I thought that the ending was a bit abrupt considering that the love and proposal all occurred in the same chapter, but surprisingly, the story continued to maintain its good flow and pace without giving me disappointments. What a fanfic!
Moving on to what I thought about the story itself:
• I find Hong Ki to be a great guy and I'm pleased that he ended up with Sun Mi, but it's also quite odd to me that there was no change of emotion in So Hee.
• Ji Young seemed really kindhearted...What could have led him to actually being a player? LOL.
Thanks again for the amazing fanfiction~!
mikazuki_angel #10
this is a really good fanfic...i really loved it...i hope that you write some more...this makes me miss Sunmi so much more...thanks for writing this