Surprise

Blind

Hongki raises his hands up

Sunmi whispers: Hongki I hope we don't get it...

Hongki whispers: why?

Sunmi whispers: well Sohee...is like on the stage... what if she finds out that you know

Hongki whispers: well...uh... we kinda got the ribbon... besides i'll tell her the truth after this

Woomin: oh look what we have here, we have have a winner

Sohee: ok now these two cupids will hide their face with a love blanket, and bring them up here

Cupids: (*laugh*) he-he

Sunmi and Hongki cover with the blanket and went on the stage

Sohee: oh look we have the perfect couple here, shall we reveal who they are?

Audience: YEAH!

Sohee: eh eh eh, but what should we do after we reveal them?

Audience: KISS KISS KISS

Sunmi whisper:omg...

Sohee pulls the blanket away

Sohee: omg....

Sunmi: (*blush*) eh hey?

Hongki: (*gulp*)

Audience: KISS KISS KISS

Sohee: yeah... do what they want... don't let them waiting

Sunmi: Sohee, but I...

Sohee: it's ok....

Without noticing Hongki grabs Sunmi head, and gives her a romantic kiss

Woomin: uh... I think it's enough now

Sunmi: oh uh sorry...

Sunmi thoughts: what was I doing....why is my heart beating so fast?

Hongki: sorry

Sohee: oh um yeah here couple rings for you guys (*laugh*)

Sunmi: um thanks

                                                    ~Everyone went home~

                                                                         ~ Middle of the night~

~Hongki's house~

knock knock

Hongki: come in

Imye: Hongki... are you and Sunny um... together now?

Hongki: mom are you worry about me... that my heart would be broken like last time?

Imye: yes! you almost kill youself after the breakup

Hongki: don't worry... we have no feeling for each other, we were just playing around

Imye: good than, well go to sleep now, it's getting late

Hongki:ok mom

Mom leaves the room

Hongki thoughts: AISH! why is my heart beating so fast when ever I think of Sunny.... no I should stop, I don't want her and Sohee argue because of me....

~~Sunmi's house~

Sunmi thoughts: ah! why was my heart beating so fast when he kissed me...., ai... maybe it's normal to feel that way when someone kisses you right? AH! I got to stop thinking about that... I have Jiyong already (*sigh*)

~Two days later~Monday~ After School~

Sunmi: Sohee are you ok, Hongki and I were just playing around, we will never fall in love with each other

Sohee: it's ok.... but when you guys were kissing you guys seem like you know

Sunmi: eh... I have a boyfrind already.... so don't misunderstand us...

Seunghyun: what! Sunmi you have a boyfriend already!

Jaejin: I knew it... such pretty girl should already have a boyfriend (*sigh*)

Sunmi: (*laugh*) well i do get a lot of love notes, but those are nothing to me

Minhwan: harsh but cool

Hongki: hey guys what are you guys talking about

Seunghyun: oh just talking about Sunmi's boyfriend

Hongki: oh... I see I wonder who he is

ring ring

Sunmi: oh hey

Jiyong: hey, i'm sorry about yesturday

Sunmi: it's ok... I understand, remember yesturday I said I understand?

Jiyong: yeah, but I don't feel right...

Sunmi: it's ok,... uh I have to go now

Jiyong: ok i'll call you when i'm free

Sunmi: ok I miss you

Jiyong: me too

Jaejin: oh... I smell love in the air

Sunmi: (*laugh*)

Sohee: (*laugh*) you must love your boyfriend a lot

Sunmi: yeah I do...

                                                         ~5 months later~

Sohee: wah! it's finally summer Sunny!

Hongki: (*laugh*) Sunny is too busy playing in the water with Seunghyun

Sohee: (*laugh*) umm Hongki... are you busy tonight?

Hongki: um no why?

Sohee: um.. how about we have dinner tonight?

Hongki: sure no problem

Sohee: how about we eat at the local cafe at 8?

Hongki: sure no problem

Sohee: (*laugh*)

~near the Water~

Seunghyun: hey look Sunny, don't they look like a sweet couple

Sunmi: of course, they are like meant to be together

Seunghyun: yeah they do look cute, but Sohee's dad and Hongki's mom actually made a wedding proposal already

Sunmi: omg are you serious! Do you know who it is for both of them?

Seunghyun: nope... I left the house before they said the name

Sunmi: AI! you should've stay there longer

Jaejin: (*laugh*) Seunghyun can never stand his paren'ts talking with other parent's

Seunghyun: (*laugh*) yeah... I don't know why though

Sunmi: (*laugh*)

                                                         ~8pm cafe~

~At table S3~

Hongki: am I early or something why isn't she hear yet

Waitor: OMG look what we have here, Hongki isn't it?

Hongki: (*gasp*) aren't you that weird waitor from last time

Waitor: (*laugh*) I am not weird... you waiting for Sunny?

Hongki: uh no... oh she's here

Waitor: her? Did you and Sunny broke up?

Hongki: we weren't actually together, we were just fooling around

Waitor: but oh well here I wanted to give you guys this a long time ago

Hongki: oh it's the picture you took last time

Waitor: yeah here, I thought you might want it, but since you guys are just pretending i'll just keep it myself

Hongki: wait no! uh... I want it for memories...

Waitor: (*laugh*) no problem, oh Hi miss...

Sohee: Hi...

Waitor: your name

Sohee: ah... Sohee

Waitor: aw you have such pretty name isn't that right Hongki?

Hongki: yeah of course

Sohee: (*blush*) thanks

Waitor: how about we try the couple combo?

Sohee: sure (*laugh*)

Hongki: um sure

~15 minutes later~

Waitor: here you ho enjoy your meal

Sohee: um Hongki I wanted to ask you this question for a really long time...

Hongki: yeah you can ask me anything

Sohee: Do you have any feelings for?

Hongki thoughts: (*shock*) I knew this day would come, what should I do, I don't know what my feeling is no more....

Hongki: yes I do... but i'm not 100% sure though..

Sohee: oh it's ok! I know if you know if you and I dated long enough... you will fall for me 100%

Hongki: I...

Sohee: it's ok let's just give each other a chance

Woomin: ah... yes you can Hongki (*laugh*)

Hongki: Cheif? Mom? what are you guys doing here for?

 

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
As I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this and now looking forward to reading this
Iminthezone #2
Congrats
jeonghae #3
congrats!!
yanhui_tan
#4
Congratulations for being featured as the story of the day =)
anditarasoekowijoto
#5
Yooongdeer!!!
il0stmymind
#6
omo yoona!
SunMiJjangWordpress
#7
I love how Hong Ki ended up with Sun Mi~
mudkip118 #8
Hmm... Interesting storyline?
danslapoubelle
#9
At first I thought that the ending was a bit abrupt considering that the love and proposal all occurred in the same chapter, but surprisingly, the story continued to maintain its good flow and pace without giving me disappointments. What a fanfic!
Moving on to what I thought about the story itself:
• I find Hong Ki to be a great guy and I'm pleased that he ended up with Sun Mi, but it's also quite odd to me that there was no change of emotion in So Hee.
• Ji Young seemed really kindhearted...What could have led him to actually being a player? LOL.
Thanks again for the amazing fanfiction~!
mikazuki_angel #10
this is a really good fanfic...i really loved it...i hope that you write some more...this makes me miss Sunmi so much more...thanks for writing this