Teaser #2 (ice dream parlor)

Sew Cute

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Everyone took a step backwards with immense aw.

Heaven was definately missing a chunk of angels. The bells of views stood with their enrapturing eminently glowing skin, and shining under the ceiling lights. The eldest’s hearts kept speeding up—his blood ran faster through his snaking veins that crawled under his milky skinned arms.

“What would you like girls?” he asked with a shaking voice, everyone couldn’t keep their eyes off the girls and they all smiled at the looks oblivious to looks of envy given to them

“How’d you get so many girls?!” smiled the attendant as the girls began to look hard and long for a flavor they would like to try.

“They are not all mine,”

“Cool can I have this one,” she sounded like a mere item to him

“She’s mine,” he said with a split emotion. He felt partially angry and protective yet he also was quite ashamed. To further this he heard

“Weren’t those girls on the news?! Yeah you heard what they said. Their all---"

                        +end of teaser+

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author's note: Ah, I’m horrible with teasers---not my given talent. I suppose I gave to much, but I had to cut out some parts of the actual part I just created---I didn’t want to give it all away (mission failed. Failed attempt at hiding it author nim) 

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spontaneity
#1
author when are you gunna update this? :( its been a year... LOL
blanderina
#2
Ohohoho xDD I can't stop laughing at this chappie xDDD
The boys are just too cute c:
I like your writing btw. :3
Hmm..who's the last girl?
pinkbubbles
#3
haha zelo and taemin almost got killed by that lady XD
spontaneity
#4
Lay gettting shy so adorable <333
LOLOL Suho is usually the non smiling one. thats a change.
chanyeol is just his happy virus like always, but now hes scu a sweet talker too.
LOLOLOLOLOL omg Zelo and Taemin are really funny <33333333
I feel bad for the last girl. shes the last girl that didn't wake up yet. sehun seems so mean in here. can't wait for next chapter!!! :D
YukiBoo
#5
Sehun so stubborn >.< I hope he wakes her up soon <3
blanderina
#6
Kang Myeong Jin? wait, is that mine?? o.o
COOL XDDD

I love this chappie~
Didn't saw any mistakes.. I'm kinda confused on who is who yet xD except for mine)
And Taemin... I love him *-*
spontaneity
#7
this chapter was sooooo gooooood!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOL omg when they freaked out, thinking Lay saw everything of their "girlfriends" awww their so protective and possessive already. can't wait to see how the boys will react when the rivals come into play. Umi sounds like alittle girl LOLOLOLOL. the influence of yongguk huh? can't wait to see how much more she got influenced by him LOLOLOL
wonder who the eight girls are :D
WildDiva #8
This chapter is very good.
Congrats to the chosen girls and good luck writing.
pinkbubbles
#9
hehe the chapter was funny :D cant wait for the next chapter
Acarlex
#10
Thank you for choosing Mirae! I loved the teaser :) it was funny how Suho got mad at Taemin hahaha :) can't wait for the next chapter!