Chapter 2: Wow, this fic was beyond devastating, heartbreaking and bittersweet. I felt really bad for Zelo. I wish there is an epilogue to this with happy ending but I guess that wasn’t supposed to be the author’s intention to convey her message to us. This story left me lingering with thoughts of one-sided unrequited love. I don’t know if this melancholic feel will bring me to, days after this. It was a good read but I’m just depressed.
Chapter 2: I don't know why I thought it was some sort of side story related to ephemeral at first, maybe that's why I imagined Yongguk in the guy's place; but my heart broke along with Zelo's, times and times again.
Chapter 2: It's a lovely story, but it's too short! I love it though, and the weather right now kind of sets the perfect miod to it too. I hope in time that Junhong will get together with her as best friends, then lovers.
Chapter 2: Ok. I don't know what too say. It just..feels....so hurt? I gasped when read "he's dead" ok I never expected this kind of ending, I do hope a-happy-ending for zelo but I know it's impossible (yeah thanks to the foreword) yet I can feel how complicated it is when you want the people you love happy, smile, but you hate when he or she happy not because of you, instead because of your 'rival'
I love the ways you progress the plot, in such a lovely way~~ and yeah I don't need to mention about the character, you described it too well xD
But I need to say that I was kidda bored when I read this...well it only talks about one thing and keeps whirligig kkk ~ but still, I enjoyed it very much!!
Chapter 2: This was written so well. I could feel everything he was experiencing and I could understand the depth of his feelings for her. I also liked the way you ended it. It was beautiful.
Chapter 2: wow this story is breathtaking. through the story, i could feel the characters' emotions clearly and it feels realistic. even though it was short, it was touching and emotional. good job with this story!!!
Chapter 2: Well the type of character zelo portrays here is amazing. I mean a person with a deep mind. A serious person that he always think what he will do first before acting on it. It's a long chapter but this kind of story is good to read once in a while. :)
Chapter 2: I'm definitely at loss of words..
You really made the story really well, and Zelo, it is like I felt him; I felt his story. This is already listed at my favorites. Good job!
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