Chapter 1: Oh wow this is good >_<

Chapter 1: //DEAD....

oh wow ;w;
i was depressed with the lack of kailu until i found this story. T-T ILY <3

T^T i actually read the story on LJ first and and T^T
i love the action dude. omfg. LuKai/KaiHan #bless
and basically, i love how you wrote this TT~TT /adores you/

This is seriously beautiful.
Not only is it extremely well written (a few errors but predominantly irrelevant), but the content is realistic and relatable and that will get a lot of audience members engaged and enjoying your works. Honestly though, reading this made me laugh and 'naw' with all the tender emotion and the young love. The heart break was particularly prevalent and very thought-inducing. I found myself feeling very nostalgic the entire time about my own first relationship (not that it was as strong or beautiful as LuKai in this story), and remembering all the good parts about it.
Anyways, I am so glad you wrote this with LuHan and JongIn, as opposed to SeHun and LuHan, whom I don't ship. I think LuKai is very fresh, and they have a great dynamic-not to mention they look gorgeous together.
Thanks for this beautiful fiction.
<3

LOVE THIS KAILU FIC OMG ;;~~~~~~;;
the storyline is so good! ><

ahhhh wow!
so beautiful <3

I'VE LOVED YOU SINCE I FIRST FOUND YOUR FICS ON LJ, ESPECIALLY LUKAI ONES.
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Never ever gonna get tired of re-reading this <3

I love your writing (Especially when it's lukai:) ). Really beautiful and I love the end, thanks.

I just read your story on livejournal and now this :O It really is amazing ! I'll fellow you for sure that's too great !