Crucial

Description

The decision to kiss for the first time is the most crucial one in any love story. So don't screw this up!

Foreword

I've written this story in the third person point-of-view again. It feels a little bit weird, but lately I've been getting some complaints about the second person point-of-view so I'm taking a little break from it. With that being said, the fictional girl in this story has been named "Hana". I know it'll be hard to insert yourself into the story when it's written in third POV and the main girl has a different name than you. But I hope that the emphasis placed on Sehun's thoughts might make up for that. I hope that I made Hana relatable enough, too. She has a very generic sort of personality and what I see as a really general name, also. Happy reading. I'm going to take a break from writing for a few weeks to focus on AP testing and then I'll be back with some new SHINee stories. 

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SuJuEXODude
#1
Chapter 1: I so agree with Sehun when he thinks that there's no film that teaches u what to do when a girl's lips are bleeding after an attempted first kiss xD At least, Hana's understanding enough with what the inexperienced Sehun has done.
bubblerabbit
#2
Chapter 1: Sehunah, you must learn that from jongin lols xD
acelysia
#3
Chapter 1: Ahahahah I do wish more!
And sure, after kiss, all the rambling explanation is going to start naturally.. Kkkk
marinemenari #4
Chapter 1: Lol. Sehun is just too cute and innocent.
But I don't think he's that innocent irl. Lol
marinemenari #5
Chapter 1: Lol. Sehun's too cute and innocent. I hope his real first kiss will be this sweet~
JangmiNana
#6
Chapter 1: sehun,you're so cute >_<
krusty
#7
Chapter 1: Sweet, innocent and precious Sehun. He'll always be like that in my eyes ^^
hunhanisreal_ot12 #8
Chapter 1: What a first-timer lol. My bias awwwww
dyo-nosaur
#9
Chapter 1: amateur kisser Sehun hmmm.... he's absolutely adorable though.
shkkrw #10
Chapter 1: Teeth to teeth hahahahahahahaha omg :")))))))