Obstruction

Description

You’re a lot like a broken child; large scared eyes and apologetic smiles, stumbling feet and a soft stuttering sometimes unsure voice... 

Foreword

Jaejoong/Junsu(ish)  ;  Junsucentric/Junsu POV

Angsty/Dramay - Not really sure what I was going for here, it basically wrote itself. 

 

Sort of meant to be Junsu's reflection through the years with Jaejoong - It came out a little different than I'd originally expected though. 

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Jaemmy #1
Chapter 1: Funnily enough, i thought of Junsu the whole time. Junsu's the one who's always in the spotlight, very much loved, carefully calculating his every move so as not to ruin his rep( SM) and Jaejoong's the one who's always been in the shadows, never appreciated, not much loved in his country and always becomes the target.
pie_su69
#2
I was really amazed to every fanfic's writer with a writing style like this. I always think "wow, he/she is a genius" and "in real life he/she must be a professional writer" because i think that not everyone has the ability to write like this. it's brilliant
JYJjaechunsu #3
Gosh this is very well written!!! You pinned down all the subtle sentiments and tension... And the emotion turns out to beso very raw and intense >< the angst is scorching and intriguing:'( i like how ur jaejoong is described ... I see him tht way too. He manipulates without realizing it. please write more !!! I have a huge crush on jaesu <3