Epilogue: Transcendent

Warflower

“Come on,” the young man’s fiancée urged, dragging him into a small room in the corner of her house that he had never visited before. Inside stood an altar dedicated to holding the spirit tablets of the young woman’s ancestors. In front of the altar was a table set with food and incense. He was Christian, so he didn’t believe in ancestors watching over people, but he had consented to paying his respects since the two of them were getting married in a church at his request.

Kneeling on the floor, she beckoned for him to join her. He dropped to his knees as well, and they closed their eyes and prayed for a moment. He didn’t know exact kind of words her prayers contained, but he was praying for her ancestors’ souls in heaven.

They opened their eyes, and as they were rising to their feet, he noticed a small bronze statue of a fox sitting on the table as part of the centerpiece.

“Here, too?” he asked, surprised.

His fiancée had always been obsessed with foxes for some reason, buying whatever items that she could that had the critters on them, even amassing a collection of stuffed foxes of various sizes. After learning of her love for them, he’d bought her a fox charm that she hung on her phone. She told him it reminded her of him, with its sharp snout and tiny, laughing eyes. One time she had even joked that she’d agreed to date him because he looked like a fox. At times, he almost questioned whether she was joking or serious.

“My family’s guardian animal is the fox,” she explained. “I never told you this before because, you know…” They had largely avoided the topic of religion, agreeing to disagree.

“Oh. That’s interesting.” His gaze traveled away from the fox and up to the two primary spirit tablets, the largest wooden pieces occupying the altar. “Who are they, anyway?” he asked, pointing. “Do you know?”

“Uh, that one’s the oldest ancestor we know of. He’s the founder of my family. The other one is famous for taking the civil service examinations and becoming one of King Sejong the Great’s government officials, increasing the family's social status” She shrugged. “According to my dad, I also had a female ancestor who fought off the Manchurian invasion at the time. Sounds pretty badass but seems a little bit far-fetched, I guess. We don't have records of it.”

He almost didn’t catch the tail end of what she said since for a minute, he was lost in a strange vision where he fought alongside a young woman disguised as a man who looked just like his fiancée. It seemed like a scene from a half-remembered dream, but in truth it felt more like a memory from another life, even though he didn’t believe in reincarnation.

At last, the vision ended, and he returned to the present. Smiling, he said, “I can believe it, Seolhye.”

The End.

A/N: The chapter after this is a bunch of background information about my writing process and self-reflections for this fic. You don't have to read it, but I think it's pretty informative. x)

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Yuyenn
#1
Chapter 3: Sungjong writes such good essays that it makes the exam graders send him essays of apology and ask about advice.
BangMind
#2
Chapter 49: as the story proceeds towards the end, I realize I didn't crave for the right thing needed to be craven for in this fic, that is romance. The focus of the story mainly centers war so it became boring to me in the second half of the story. At times, it felt rushy (esp. towards the end, there were many details that I think could have been addressed but easily passed or barely mentioned at all) but most of the times in the middle of story, it becomes draggy (or so I felt). Though I love Seollan and Hoya's characteristics, both of them and their interaction seem weird in the final chapters. I can't really explain why, and that's purely my opinion.
It was still a fun read till the end. I expected more about the romance part, but overall you did a great job with your wordings and writing style. I love Sunggyu though. I don't know, but his past life and all his interactions with Seollan make me pity him to the fullest. Oh, the way you write felt dry at times, so Seollan's thoughts about Sunggyu (esp. in their last encounter) came off to me as a bit heartless.
All of this is an opinion of mine. I might have sounded rude, but I hope I made my point clear and it was not a hate comment. If I hate it, I wouldn't have read it till the end :)
BangMind
#3
Chapter 11: ah... I love their encounters everytime...
hunny_fishyhae
#4
Chapter 48: after a thousand times reading this, it just hit me that seolhye's fiance might be sunggyu no?
pinott #5
Chapter 49: this fic of yours deserves lots of attention and subscribers. i got hooked up by your story, although its mulan's story inspired but i can't help but to acknowledge your writing skills, great story, plot, development characters and everything, wish you all the best luck on your upcoming works, fighting!!
predilection
#6
Chapter 3: I remember this part clearly; "Father, you can't go!" That was what Mulan said when she didn't want her father to go! I love Mulan story so I decided to give your fic a try even though the fact that a lot is in common quite a bother to me I still put it aside.

But its a relief that you did not copy all the way everything at least the simple things changed a bit. I like that Sunggyu is a fox spirit and granted a human form. Yong Junhyung played the Lord Of the House or something and using his 26 years old body to be shown lol that was funny. And I noticed that the grandmother is not here instead you replaced with a brother, Sungjong. I remember that grandmother is the one who bothers Mulan alot about marriage but here you made mother a nagger. Impressive! Congrats. I can't wait to see the others.

I bet Woohyun/Sungyeol will be Ling or thet burly short guy whose name I can't recall lol. Chien Po? Couldn't be Myungsoo hhahahaha. And of course definitely Howon is the Captain Shang!
missdauxian
#7
Chapter 49: I loove this and I thank my friend who rrcommend me this Hoya fangic. no drama so yeah ! :) I just wish there was a part2 or something sequel one shot of the after wrdding thing of Hoya and Seollan. they're just too cute!
awesome2304 #8
Chapter 26: this is literally mulan
MisaPanda #9
Chapter 48: Second time reading this story and it still is one of my favorite Hoya fanfics <3
hiimbob #10
Hello there, a bit late, but I've just finished this, and I'd just like to commend your for such a well-written story! I rarely come across good Hoya fics, he was definitely sigh-worthy in this one! Again, good job! :)