Cold!

Description

Hi, this is my first scenario. If ever you guys find anything wrong with my work, please tell me. Hope you guys like it and thank you :)

Foreword

*YOU*

-Pretty.

- outgoing.

-a little childish.

-likes surprises.

-secretly inlove with your bestfriend.

 

*BIAS*

-cute.

-adventurous.

-your bestfriend.

-likes calling you Jagiya.

-Inloved with you since 8.

Comments

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prinzy25 #1
so sweet.... ^.^
Dubu89
#2
It was very sweet! But if I can make a suggestion, your story is easier to read if you make those paragraphs little shorter - and by this I mean that last paragraph. Somebody may have difficulties to read. But in all this was cute! :)
AndreaSardina #3
guys. hope you liked it!