Chapter 10: It's been a long time since you last updated this fic. Real life or something else must've occupied your time to keep you from updating. Since it's been so long, I wonder if you still remember the whole story of the Barbie movie you watched that this fic is based on. It feels like ages ago since I watched that movie, but I forgot its name.

It is amusing for the two to catch each other in their pajamas. Their childhood favorites must have a place deep in their hearts. Myungsoo's princely pride does get in the way of him being nice. Cheebom is good about teaching him good manners and humility. She's a fine example herself. With Soyou's prodding, she's realized how she truly feels at the moment after giving it some thought. His happy whistling could be interpreted as him having a girlfriend since getting his dream girl makes a guy feel all giddy inside. Nothing's for certain without proof. So, Sungyeol would have to investigate to find the answer.

Yay! Update!! Wahh...~~ so cute~~!!

Out of the three princesses, Jiyeon seems to be the most sensible one. She doesn't seem to be as bad of a person as Hara and Hyuna. Because of the intimidating aura that Hara gives off, she's scared to go against her and interfere with her business. She can learn from Cheebom about speaking up for herself. It won't be hard for Jiyeon to get along with her since she's doesn't have the same air of arrogance like the other two princesses.

Some Ch. 9 typos:

Hyuna looked at Hyuna up and down.
* It doesn't make sense for Hyuna to be looking at herself since she's not standing in front of a mirror. It should be "Soyou" instead.

Myungsoo never stood or cared to barge into Hara's doungs or even go against her since everyone thought they had something.
Correction: Myungsoo never stood up or cared to barge into Hara's doings or go against her since everyone thought that they had something.
* "Business" is a better word to refer to it than "doings."

There are some typos in the other chapters too. The most common that I've found is your improper usage of "we're" and "they're." Those two are contractions for "we are" and "they are." It must be confusing to you since they sound the same as "were" and "their." It should've been "were" in places where you're using it as a verb. "Their" is a possessive adjective that's used to refer to something belonging to more than one person. It's best to proofread your work before submitting it.

Living a royal life gives him the opportunities to spend his money however he wants without worrying about the price because everything gets easily handed to him. There's a lot out there in the real world that Myungsoo has yet to see since he's spend all his life being cooped up in the palace. She can also teach him how to appreciate life, even the simple things. It's cute to see the two playing with the young kids in the park. xD Myungsoo chasing the kids around the grassy area while acting like a dinosaur or some kind of monster is a funny sight to witness. This is a good opportunity for her to see the childish/playful side of the usual stoic, composed prince. He must've missed the good old days when he was a kid. It was a moment of awkwardness for them when they ended up on the ground in a compromising position, which became the of the kids' teasing. Soyou and Quilee are such great friends to stand by Cheebom and back her up when she was being accused by Hara for physically harming her. With Infinite involved, she has all the support that she needs. It's obvious that Myungsoo really cares for Cheebom to come to her defense. She seems to have rub off on him for him to be able to talk back to Hara. It's the second time that he's helped her out since the time when they were being questioned by the headmistress about their whereabouts. Judging from her reaction, it's obvious that Hara must be the princess who was spying on Myungsoo and Cheebom. They seem to have wasted all that paper for a good one hour of conversation between them. It must've been something interesting for the two to get caught up in that they didn't realize that the paper supply in the printers was quickly running out with every message sent. There's still the deal that she has going with Myungsoo about treating him to a day of fun within the thirty-dollar limit. A day at an amusement park sounds like her idea of fun. It's another chance for her to see his playful side some more.

This looks like an interesting plot. Since I haven't watched the Barbie movie that inspired you to write this fic, I'm not sure how much similar this story will be to it. It'd be nice if you add some of your own twists and creativity to the story to make it more of your original work rather than basing the whole story entirely on the movie. Anyways, it's fun reading throught this because of the humor in every chapter except the first one.

The two lead characters coming from two different worlds are bound to clash at first. It must be a first for a prince like him to be treated disrespectfully by someone, particularly a girl. Because of his princely charm and good looks, he's used to every girl swooning over him. So, her behavior towards him is what he didn't expect. That makes her different from typical girls. Despite his arrogance and cold-looking demeanor, he's a nice person inside. It's evident when he slipped a cushion under Cheebom's head to prevent her from getting a head injury due to constant bumping against the window pane. Appearing cold in front of the ladies must be his way of keeping any of them from getting close to him. Hara is already enough of a hassle for him. Due to the kind of upbringing that she's gotten all her life, she doesn't have the manners of a princess and is just like one of those typical, humble common people. It is admirable of Cheebom to stand up to Hara and not hesitate to speak her mind despite her status. She does take her foster mother's teachings seriously, including her advice about not letting others walk all over her. Myungsoo and Cheebom have much to learn from each other so that the two can come to a mutual understanding and develop a good relationship. By spending time with her, he's starting to learn what life outside of the palace is like. One thing that he's learned is spending money wisely.

Oh, i thought of something else. Nvm~ good job :)

Wuahaha*sobs sobs* why no update?? I cant stand waiting~~
author-nim update ok?

yo ahjumma! its the first time..again that i saw quilee talked. like cmon!! give quille a love story :DDD and soyou too~

@Monkeybread0609 nae... I just did.. :) unless you already read it... .__.

Update please