Rosebud.

Description

 

remembrance only exists if there's something worth     remembering 

                               hope     can only exist if there is     disaster

                                                lessons   are learnt with   conflict

                                                               LOVE   stays strong with   bonding

 

fIt's easy for someone to say that love exists,

                                                            when they in turn have never encountered it for themselves,

                                                                                             It's easy for someone to say that love has no trouble or pain,

                                                                                                                             When they in turn have never felt the heart as it breaks

 

 

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it ok
I miss you

 
- When Your Gone by Avril Lavigne

 

 

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Have you ever experienced pain for yourself?
When your heart breaks into a millions pieces...
and shatters like glass against the floor?
Can you full heartedly say...
that you know how it feels?

 

 

Amber's life was turned from a normal, boring everyday routine when she met Agent Soo from KCI (Korea Crime Investigation). In the most awkward situation ever, she was forced to go along with his little charade. However, when love entered the picture, things became harder...until one day, Amber woke up...and he was gone..

Foreword

this is inspired by
When I'm Gone by Avril Lavigne 
                       
  - This song came to my head randomely when I was writing the story
                             and it fits well with the idea...though it isn't the prompt. But I thought
                            it was worth mentioning.

This Is Love by Super Junior-M (Skip Beat OST)
                          - This is the inspiration. It is the prompt so I'm mentioning it.

 


♫ Sounds of Melodies [Writing Contest] 2012 ♫ - amber contest myungsoo writing myungber writingcontest - main story image 

sound of melodies writing contest 2012 ™

This is a contest run by Mary517 and KPossible21. The contest gives your main characters and you
have to use your awesome imagination and skills to try and win :)

 

Click HERE to go to the contest

 

I hope you enjoy this story! Feel free to comment with some idea's on how it could be better! The story will be long because I find that when I'm entering a contest, I tend to write longer stories. Plus i know where I want to go with it

Here's the song (This Is Love) that inspired the story! It's amazing, trust me!

 

 

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If anyone wants to assist with a story, PM me :)

Comments

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Mary517 #1
This was great ^_____^
I'm glad that Myungsoo didn't leave her <3
But his prayer for some odd reason made me feel uneasy....i kept thinking you were going to take his life...xD
Anyhooo thanks for sharing and participating in the contest ^___^
KimPossible21 #2
Nice ending :D
I love it!
Though I cringed when Myung Soo calls her "baby" xD
Anyway, thank you for joining! :D stay tuned till 17 May. U can write anoher one too :D
HyunseungBeastLoveUr
#3
TWO WORDS : SO AWSOME !!!!!
Mahalia1012 #4
This is beautiful ^^
What a very nice ending ^_~
I love how you used the analogy between a rose and their relationship. I love analogies! ^^
You should really make it into an actual story! ^^ it will be awesome, I believe!
Mahalia1012 #5
Wow... you have a very interesting story here.
It was so short, but captures the readers' interest so well. It makes me want to know more about myungber's past and relationship before we get to this point. It was a nice cliffhanger too and I'm sure everyone is at the edge of their seat to find out what on earth is going on?

I would like you to clarify to me, though, is that photo supposed to be the orphanage? ^^; if it is, it looks haunted haha.

I wonder if the genre is action or thriller?
Anyway, I hope you won't let us wait too long ^^
KimPossible21 #6
Oh right, also When You're Gone. That's when I thought it'll be "in between" angst and happy chappy xD
KimPossible21 #7
oh wow when i first read the top bit, I didn't find it interesting (the part where amber's just saying how she realises it must be love etc.). but as I read on, I am hooked! xD But I don't think it's your writing / story, it's just the font xD

Anyway, I like it :D
Get on with the next chap, woman!! xD
When you said you're using This is Love, I thought it would be happy chappy story until I read the Desc. and thought "maybe it'll be in between", but now I've read this first chap, I'm like... O_O lemme think again.
Wish this isn't a one/two shots xD

P.S.: you might want to proofread first chap. Some typos there :)
nanathedirewolf
#8
Oh interesting. Can't wait for the next update.