Three Times

Description

It took him three times, three attempts, before he finally got it right.

Foreword

Name: Lee JaeYun
Age: 18
Personality: sweet, kind, understanding, responsible, trusting, helpful, independant
Bias: [please include what group s/he is from] Onew- SHINee
   Plot bunny: the first date on xmas day ^^

For FicEx.

To the person who requested this plot bunny (musicISme), I hope you enjoy it, and I apologize if I did not do your plot any justice. Honestly, it was a little difficult for me since I only received a single line (first date on xmas) for a plot. How I had managed to stretch that out to 2500+ words, I would never know, but I hope you enjoy nonetheless.

I will admit to rushing this to some extent, and therefore, it's also very much unedited, so please disregard any grammatical errors and such in my writing.

Merry Christmas~

-Karlo

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grimmjowmylove #1
Chapter 1: This is really cute and romantic!! <3 I love that kind of Jinki =)
OnASnowyDay #2
nice! Love onew
onewjjang #3
That is so adorable. :D<br />
Nervous Jinki is so cute. :D
CrystalRainbow #4
Cute~ :D:D Really cute and sweet and nice and (see I'm so stunned I've resorted to using primary school vocab to describe this aigoo lol ahaha)
Miyoko_Kato #5
Lol... this is cool... <br />
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I know I shouldn't have read your fics... Shame on my writing ability!<br />
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so... do not read any of my fics again, okay???<br />
saranghaejunsu #6
LOL, this was so cute!
WinterRose #7
Aww, Dubu was so sweet in this . :)
strawberryGLASSES #8
This story, to bluntly put it, was freakin' awesome *O*.<br />
I love your writing style and only hope that one day my writing can be as intelligently put as yours! I think you've captured Onew very well because it totally sounds like him to mess up while trying to convey his true feelings lol.
madz67 #9
love this.
chas_ssmentrok #10
lol :))<br />
Onew-oppa fails at confessing <3
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