"Protect The Child"

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Hyori_Rain
If you need the link to the new story, contact me by tomorrow at around 8:00. That's when I'm putting it up and deleting this one.

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ilabya29 #1
interesting~
WordsUntold
#2
God, poor Ricky. It's horrible the way the managed to just... break him like that.
At least Niel understands what he's going through, that should make it better, I hope.
kikwang23
#3
i read the story n its wonderful, but does the title mean ' Protect The Child ', its ricky thts the child or niel n wen is niel goin to start to speak?
xJungSquaredx
#4
....O: Baby J should've gotten her own fork!! >< Poor Ricky! I hope Bora beats the out of Siwon...>> But yayy! NIEL AND HYORIN ARE REUNITED!! XD
WordsUntold
#5
Hehe, I am really loving Baby J. :3 Her poems are pure literary genius, too. XD
xJungSquaredx
#6
Poor Niel. He does nothing wrong and still, he gets bullied. Can't wait to see some character growth from Niel. XD Ren is so funny. ^^
WordsUntold
#7
I just don't understand why they insist on picking on Niel when he hasn't done a thing or said as many as two words to even mildly irritate them. =/ It's so unfair.
I really liked the way you described the bullies as cats, and especially CAP as a stray. I don't know why, that metaphor really struck me for some reason.
xJungSquaredx
#8
Wtf?? They locked Niel in his locker?? s. >> Omg! CAP saved him!! XDD I love it soo much so far. Really cant wait for the next one. :D
xJungSquaredx
#9
Omg. It's getting so interesting!! :D
WordsUntold
#10
Oh god, I have friends who write KirkXSpock fanfics too. The mental images are horrible. XD
I find this intriguing. I really wonder what trouble Siwon and his friends will stir up, now that everything seems to be going well for Niel.