Jealousy

Description

In which Yesung is jealous and Kyuhyun is thrown for a curve ball while trying to placate him.

Foreword

This is my 21st story....I have always like the number 21...its like one of those numbers were you can cease an action but be numerically perfect....yeah I am sort of weird.

This a story set in my No Words Needed Continuum, so should be placed between Against the Fate and Three is Company is I am reading my crazy time line properly.This one is based on Yesung feeling a bit of jealousy and Kyuhyun trying to make him feel better...I do promise a surprising twist though...lol...It is as usual can be read as a oneshot, though will advise that if you are prevailed upon to read it, you do so when time and concentration is avaliable...its long...over 14,500 words and about 23 pages..so good luck. I am still sick, so apologize for any errors that escaped by fail editing skills. Hope you can enjoy it :)

Comments are Loved :)

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farrelandmerry
367 streak #1
Chapter 1: It's still funny tho I've read this before! The way Yesung got jealous, and not with Kyu, but with Changmin! Super! 😂
xoxo_exo_chanbaek
#2
Chapter 1: Omg this is a funny kind of jealousy. Kyuhyun is going insane. Nyahaha
farrelandmerry
367 streak #3
Chapter 1: wuaaah! WUAAAH! So much for my heart XDDD~
359359
#4
Chapter 1: Awwwww.... just awwwww, can I please gush over how cute this is? Yesung my crazy bias I love you and your abnormal quirks. Seriously? jealous of the wrong person. *Sigh* Only Yesung. I smiled the whole time I reread this. I love reading your fics again and again they truly make my day. Honestly kyusung is just perfect, and they way you write them is even more perfect <3. I love that Kyuhyun wanted Yesung to be jealous, I suppose I would feel the same way, but we all know with Yesung you don't know what to expect. But that just makes everything he does more adorable. Thank you for this.
JayJayELF
#5
Chapter 1: OMG!!!! jealous Yesung is...... so kyute!!!! but it's so funny that he was jealous of Kyuhyun instead of Changmin XD poor Kyuhyun
carolina #6
omooo, yesungie is too cute here... they look so adorable.. when yesung got jealous to changmin.. omoooo, omoo, I love you're stories..
lahdeedah000 #7
Aigooo, Yesungie is just too kyute! >.< I literally burst out laughing when I finally figured out that Yesung was actually jealous of Kyu being with Changmin, not the other way around. They are both way too adorable. <3
reginag
#8
ok couples: yewon, minwook, eunhae, teukchul and yehae?

now about the story,
I loved it, good job!!!, when changmin said: I haven’t seen him in a while and I miss him. i remembered that cut from come to play but i no expect this reaction on Yesungie...hilarius...;)
How ever Kyu is so mischievous with his answers and pure love. Srsly you, i mean kyu has a sever obsession with Siwon. Poor kyus mind always worried.
Paris is coming, so i hope find more yekyu moments.
PreciousKyu #9
So I finally got my lazy to comment. I'm such a bad, bad, bad dongsaeng. This was indeed not what I expected, but it was an awesome way too keep it interesting. I was like: Are you freaking kidding me, Jongwoon?! And I felt totally stupid for feeling jealous on his behalf. lol But with Yesung one should expect the unexpected. 

I was floating along with lovesick Kyu while reading the ending, as always. I secretely wanted to lay in between them in a total non-y way. But that would mean that I'd deprive them from each other's warmth and I wouldn't wanna do that to my OTP(Aaaawww). I'm particulary fond of the fics that take place when the relationship is a bit advanced, cause they're just that bit more fluffy and sweet. I don't know...

I hope you'll forgive me for not commenting in your previous stories. But you know that I always enjoy reading them. To think of it; you're actually the first writer who got me commenting. Hehe Keep up the good work unnie!<333

Ps: It wouldn't be right for me to guess your other favourite couples, since I already know them.


Xxx
thursday #10
Okay, I finally had a chance to reread! I love the allusion to wonderland(I am an Alice addict). I like odd guys, too(and I live with several), it does keep life interesting because you really never know what they are thinking, and it is usually nothing what you think it is.

This sort of love is hard, as ice420 said. The highs are higher and the lows are lower. But I like that they have still maintained their independence, and besides Siwon, there is little jealousy. It is easy to lose yourself in love and in the one you are in love with. But that is dangerous. They seem to be avoiding this trap(I do realize that I am talking about fictional characters, but you do such a lovely job of making them real)

I also love it when K. argues with himself. It was so funny when he kept getting caught daydreaming with Changmin. And that they both remembered him gushing about Y right after the confession. That sort of detail really makes the story much richer.

Of course I don't mind if you call me Unnie. Just don't call me ahjumma. lol. :) I got sad news this morning. We just got a new computer, but it has some issues, so we have to ship it back tomorrow--so I have no idea when I will be able to access the internet again. Until I can sneak off to the library maybe. So don't think I have abandoned you.