Broken Promise

Description

Hi there chingu! ^_^v

I'm JAMLilover  and I'm here to REPOST my daragon one-shot. [Yes, I decided to repost this after AFF was down.]

So, to  all of you who have read this already and to those who have not please enjoy! ~

Especially you you! <3 ^^

 

"When you walk away, I count the steps that you take."

 

 

READ,SUBSCRIBE AND COMMENT! ^^

 

 

 

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED JAMLilover 2012

No printing or redistribution allowed.

Do not post anywhere else.Do not plagiarize.

Foreword

Just wanna say this, ENGLISH IS NOT MY MOTHER LANGUGE, so I hope you'll be kind enough to overlook all grammatical errors and what not! ~ ;)

 

 

NOTE: All the scenes are not true. This is just a product of an imaginative mind. Don't take the scenes seriously and just enjoy the story! Thank You! ^^

Comments

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C_a_r_o_LL
#1
Nice fanfic !! Fighting!
Myungjiyounglo
#2
myungjiyounglo ?? Whoa!
x0xlilpunkx0x #3
this was a heartbreaking one shot </3 Dara was so cruel.
thanks for sharing :]
hibaharu1886 #4
Chapter 1: This is so sad and heartbreaking and mor with the music, still beautiful
love_kris
#5
i am crying this is so sad
luvMetoo #6
aww...so sad
ItzJaeKay #7
Awwwww I wanna go and cry in the corner now
Sooo sad, I knew he was going end his life in the end but it still hurts to see it
Monkeybread0609 #8
This was good
shellybelly123
#9
hey! :D i am soryy i was not able to read this oneshot sooner. >.< i was not notified in any way... BACK TO YOUR STORY! i really liked how you made Dara the "bad guy" in the story, even though she is all innocent and cute and what not.... i the tragic ending was an extra touch that most oneshots that i have read so far, which all had an happy ending. i have to say that this oneshot was good compared to other oneshots that i had reveiwed... i hoope you continue you fanfics and message me when you want me to review your other stories and i hope to hear from you soon!

-Best Wishes
shellybelly123