Building a Future Together

Bae Joohyun's Green Flag Love
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Seungwan and Joohyun stood at the edge of a cliff, overlooking a breathtaking sunset. The hues of pink, orange, and gold painted the sky, mirroring the vibrant colors of their love. They held each other's hands tightly, their hearts filled with excitement and anticipation for the future they were about to embark upon.

 

Seungwan turned to Joohyun, a sparkle of anticipation in her eyes. "Joohyun, I can't help but imagine the life we could build together. A life filled with love, laughter, and shared dreams. A life where we grow old together, cherishing every precious moment."

 

Joohyun's smile illuminated her face, her voice filled with a gentle warmth. "Seungwan, imagining our future together fills my heart with joy. I see a life where we continue to support and inspire each other, where we create a home filled with love and create memories that will last a lifetime."

 

Seungwan's voice trembled with emotion as she spoke, her voice carrying the weight of her commitment. "I want to build a future with you, Joohyun. A future where we pursue our individual dreams while always finding comfort and strength in each other's embrace. Together, we can conquer any challenges and celebrate every triumph."

 

Joohyun's eyes shimmered with unwavering love as she gazed at Seungwan. "Seungwan, I can't imagine a future without you. I want to cr

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Riscark #1
Chapter 8: Bruh that first line, before the comma, almost got me, I thought it was gonna turned into angst
Riscark #2
Chapter 3: Communication is the key, in the relationship it's easy to get lost in your insecurity or your past memory, but if you can communicate with your person, it won't be hurdle anymore
Cyrell #3
Chapter 4: I wish I can have their relationship. You make me envy with the story. Good writing. It gives me positivy as well. Your story is something to look forward to.
Riscark #4
Chapter 2: The perfect morning doesn't exi-
*BAMMM this chapter exist
Riscark #5
Chapter 1: For a sec I thought it was gonna end with angst 😅As usual tho, you manage to wrote beautiful story authornim
Nat25nat #6
It's weird, it's stated that the word count 5475 words however after I open the first chapter it's only 633 words
shadowhunter1640 #7
Chapter 1: Foreword made me anticipate the journey of Joohyun as was said. And the 1st paragraph piqued my interest. But i was kind of disappointed with how the story flowed. It was too quick and didn't feel like a journey at all. Quite unrealistic since it's unlikely that someone would take a chance with a stranger though a one night stand would be possible. And their spoken words were too cringey to say the least.

I've contemplated leaving these negative comments here because i thought the author would feel bad. But i've decided to push it instead for i believe it will help develop your writing. Too good comments may make you feel good but i believe negative ones can push you through greatness. So author please don't feel offended by what i've written.

On the note of the positives, i've liked your adjectives and how you constructed your sentences. Please continue writing and thank you for sharing your work with us. Fighting!
rizkybae
#8
Chapter 1: Padahal cerita nya bagus tapi terlalu pendek
rizkybae
#9
Izin baca
Joanajade
#10
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