Red Tips

Description

Why Donghae pleaded with Leeteuk to let him light Kyuhyun on fire, and why Eunhyuk was oblivious.

Foreword

lynn_ness requested that I write a oneshot to compliment What An Umma Must Do


This is the other half of the story.  :D

 

I hope you like it!

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OdetteSwan 934 streak #1
Chapter 2: This is light, fun and sweet. A beautiful romantic date full of surprises.
Thank you so much for sharing. ❤️
toluene #2
Chapter 2: I have this bookmarked but I don't remember it from years ago. I think I'll read it again, it seems so nice and I must have liked it when I first did.
-Tigress- #3
OH! And the rose. I forgot to mention. Brilliance!!!
-Tigress- #4
Chapter 2: Okay I absolutely love this story! I have never shipped Kyu+Eunhyuk and I admit, I was a little skeptical when I clicked on the story... new pairings are often fun but for bands that I used to be a huge fan of, it can be boring. This, however, was not at all!!! I was also skeptical because of the comedy tag, since I am not a big fan of that genre, but the bit that you added in was perfectly done. LMAO about locking D into the bathroom, that made me laugh out loud. The amount of comedy in this is just enough to lend a bit of a light and fun air to the story while still centering on the romantic factor.
I gotta say, I absolutely loved the little tidbits you added to make everything seem so well-thought-out. The way that K knew where to hide the tickets, because he knew what clothes E would go for: the way that he took him to the zoo despite not being a fan of it himself: the suit waiting for them and the strawberry desert. All of it was so nicely done, I could feel myself being wooed!
And speaking of the strawberries... The way that you describe the kiss is WOW!!! Sensual and sweet and UGH. Just UGH. <3
In a critical note, I found a few typos but nothing big. Other than that... no, even including them, I think this story is phenomenal. <3
Skychrome #5
Chapter 2: This was SO BEAUTIFUL <3333 Kyu is such a romantic!
And the end, omg, the END <3333 Thankyou for sharing *--*
frootloops101 #6
LOVE IT!!!!!!! I really like Kyuhyuk and I love how you write the boys. I agree with mewiexi; this does need a sequel!!!
mewlexi #7
OMG This needs a sequel!!! Waaa so good!!! :D
akemi59 #8
so sweet!!!!!
LittleAriel #9
this is amazing to read <3
I was blushing like a teengirl reading this <3
definitely something I would go back to read once in a while <3
thank you for writing this!
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