Chapter 1: oh my goodness, this was so beautiful! i love how you fleshed out the world and x-exo themselves, and the super sweet confession from x-baek!!! this interpretation of their lore is so lovely.

(also, as a yeol-biased, i love how x-yeol taught hyerim how to fight. loved his fight scenes in the mv, and i can imagine him being a great mentor, esp as a huge goof.)

Chapter 1: Aahaa it was so good!!! How can u write such a great work 🤩 I wish there was more to it but even though it was oneshot it felt really good💖 Thanks for writing such an amazing fic I really loved it!!!

This is so well-written. I enjoyed reading it so much, I wish it was a multi-chartered fic. Thank you for it!

Chapter 1: Hiii Mari!! 🥰 👉👈 omg what an amazing surprise aaahhhh, you couldn't have picked a better AU, seriously 😭💖 Just shows that you know my taste really well. I LOVE X-EXO MORE THAN EXO AT THIS POINT 😂 Can't get enough of this amazing comeback.
Plus, an alien AU is something I've been looking for! These are super rare, especially on AFF.

I love this, from the beginning to the end! You're great at describing landscapes (and the setting in general). Imagining Hyerim's surroundings was super easy even though it's an unusual scenery you wouldn't find anywhere else! When she explored the planet, the atmosphere was gloomy and dangerous. I got excited immediately cause I love it when characters get to explore unknown places, especially when there are unexpected surprises... LIKE A WHOLE X-BAEKHYUN FOR EXAMPLE 😏🔥 hehe

THAT RASCAL WAS SO SMUG FROM THE MOMENT HE FIRST APPEARED sfjskdfsf 😂😭 haha I love hiiiim. I have to stop myself before I turn into a simp and dont mention anything but him. 💀😂 I HAVE TO CALM DOWN. sjfkdjsk

So, anyway, it's nice that you incorporated details from the music video as well, like X-Chen's chess board or Sehun's archery skills. 🥰 And X-Kai being a mischievous little is soooo fitting. 😂 That's exactly how I would imagine his character to act. A much more chaotic version of Jongin. jskfjdsk

You added these little hints about the connection she feels to the others, especially MY BABY X-BAEKHYUN 🔥😙 fksfjskd I really liked this as well, it added to the suspense and made me wonder what Hyerim's secret is. Because it seemed like she was unaware of it 🥺
Also, the chemistry between her and X-Baekhyun 😭😭😭 Every scene with them was so intriguing! I could have read like a whole multichapter fic just about them. 👉👈 THIS FIC AS A WHOLE HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL WHAT IS THIS!! you could totally turn it into a long fic with lots of space adventures and silly X-EXO shenanigans. 😏 There's so much to explore about this idea. MARI, YOUR CREATIVE BRAIN WORKED SOME REAL MAGIC HERE. ✨⭐ you're a fairy I knew it.

The fact X-EXO destroyed a whole planet like it's nothing, damn they're powerful. 😭 But when he said "I couldn't hurt you" AHHH jhsjfhdj my heart 💖🥰🔥 hnggg I'm soft for this guy. The little moment they shared was sooo cute UNTIL X-KAI BARGED IN. cause what else is he supposed to do? Lol Barging in is his super power 😂

Hyerim being the Heart also is so interesting!! I'm starting to understand why she feels a connection to Baek and the rest. The puzzle pieces are coming together now 🥺💖 Btw, I'm glad EXO and X-EXO didn't end up fighting, cause that would have put her in a difficult position 😨

INSTEAD SHE GOT A KISS FROM MY FAVORITE BABY 😙 JACKPOT, I would say 🥰 Such a sweet ending, I love love it!! They're in for a lot of teasing from the other X-EXO members from now on, hehe. 😏 which is deserved because they're so adorable sjfkdsjfk 😭

Mari how did you come up with this masterpiece, it's a chef's kiss 😭😭😭 Idk how to explain it but it's like you know exactly what kind of fic I would enjoy??? HUH that's actually insane. Like, the adventure part at the beginning, the suspense, chaotic X-EXO, smirking X-Baekhyun with a soft side 🤧 Iss everything I'm weak for. 👉👈

So I owe you a big thank you!! Merci beaucoup d'avoir écrit cela ! Je l'adore. C'est le meilleur cadeau de Noël. On devrait le faire chaque année. 🎄💖