Sorry That I Loved You {One Shot}

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For all of the time that I tried for your smile
For making you think that I was worth the while
So your love love love love love would be mine
For sending you flowers and holding your hand
That no one was there to take a stand
But then love love love made us blind
And I'm so sorry that I hurt you
Sorry that I fell through
Sorry I was falling in love with you
I'm sorry that it came true
But sorry doesn't turn back time
For all that I have done to you
I wish that I could make it right
So sorry that I loved you
Sorry that I needed you
Sorry that I hold you tight
And I'm So sorry for... 
Making you love me and saying goodbye
For being the one that taught you how to cry
It was love love love and it passed us by
For giving you every thing that you dreamed
For taking it back when I fled the scene
Sorry love, for wasting your time
And I'm so sorry that I hurt you
Sorry that I fell through
Sorry I was falling in love with you
I'm sorry that it came true
But sorry doesn't turn back time
For all that I have done to you
I wish that I could make it right
I'm so sorry that I loved you
Sorry that I needed you
Sorry that I hold you tight
And apology now after all of this time
Won't make my difference tonight
But I'm hoping I'm Sorry will open your mind
To love love love love in your life
Sorry that I hurt you
Sorry that I fell through
Sorry I was falling in love with you
I'm sorry that it came true
But sorry doesn't turn back time
For all that I have done to you
I wish that I could make it right
So sorry that I hurt you
Sorry that I fell through
Sorry I was falling in love with you
I'm sorry that it came true
But sorry do can't turn back time
I'm sorry that I loved you
I'm sorry that I hurt you
I'm so sorry that I loved you
I'm sorry that I hurt you
Sorry that I loved you

Foreword

 

Hey! Mary517 here! I know I have other fics to finish...but out of the blue i suddenly decided to write a one-shot. ^___^ 

I reposted this several times.....Don't judge me xD 

The songfic is based off Anthony Neely's 'Sorry that I loved you' =]

I know that everything isn't explained word for word...but i hope you can make connections? I HOPE! hahaha* Its a pretty long one shot...so hopefully you don't get confused from me cutting from scene to scene. haha*

Anyhoo....ENJOY! PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK!!!! 

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Mahalia1012 #1
Oh my God.
This is such a tear-jerker. Q_Q The letter and diary...
This is such a REALLY good one shot. It serves it purpose and it goes well with the title. The story flows really well too. The ending was just... wonderful. It's final and it lets us know that Amber is going to move on with life. Though, it's sad that Myungsoo dies, but still I love it ^^

The part that got me the most was "Can't you see that you're worth it?" Q_Q
I love Amber's character here. Would you laugh if I say she's like me? Oh hell yes, I'll definitely be so angry with my boyfriend if he leaves like that Q_Q After everything, he just leaves with an apology letter?! >_> Alright, this is getting depressing. Let's move on.

I'm surprised you had Yoochun as Amber's brother. I expect Jonghyun or Donghae since they look alike ^^; but it's a nice change. They can be siblings, I think ^^

Also, I know it's courtesy to call guys older than you with 'Oppa', but I cannot picture Amber calling her boyfriend 'Oppa' hahaha.I picture her calling him 'Myungsoo' or 'Myung' ^^;

Another thing, it was a bit confusing when you moved from the future to the past. Font changes or putting the past in italics or changing the tenses could work too.
And 'Oh, what the hey'? Oh, what the hell? ^^;

Anyway, thank you for such a good one shot. Write more! ^^
dream_keeper88 #2
It was sad that he died but the ending made up for it. She forgave him.

/why are most myungber fics sad?
msrbcca #3
OMFG *SOBS*
DO YOU HATE ME!?! WHY DO YOU WANT TO MAKE ME CRY??!
lol good story! I love it so much <3
sleepylips #4
*UGLY SOBBING NOW I SWEAR* </3
KimPossible21 #5
I can't stop reading this story again and again T_T
Jhessica #6
T^T
nanathedirewolf #7
Holy crap that was well written and extremely sad.
simplymissinyou #8
AMAZING. This is really darn amazing. I think there is no words to describe how I feel right now. It's deep and real. By the way, I LOVE this song so freaking much. That's why this title caught my eyes the moment I saw it. Good job girl!<333
ahnminah13 #9
Who knew that a one-shot can make someone cry a noodle-bowl full of tears??? Dear author: I LOVE YA!!!
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